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By : classic06

From Violence on May 17, 2009
Huh, it seems Ashley's getting jealous of Carrie as well. ROFL, the chef owned that guys ass. Whooooa. That bit of "teaching" was particularly inspiring. lol, it seems both sets of girls in this fic and Love Quotes have the same unacknowledgment going on. Except this one has that they won't even admit it out loud or maybe it's just so kind of unspoken agreement. Either way it adds that underlying fear and attraction. "Yea, but my dad's gay, so as far as I'm concerned, we're all adopted.""Or dropped off by aliens," Laughed my ass off at that and the whole end part.
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From ANON - greens on May 16, 2009
Very well-written. I really loved it. They are getting so close & I wonder how long it will take them before they realize that they are in love with each other. I think that Kelly's mom & Carrie's dad both see the signs. Great job.
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From ANON - sugar on May 12, 2009
i especially loved the parts about kelly's childhood. like i said- beautiful. her mom going into her room and watching them sleep is such a simple scene but you gave it so much depth. great job! i really can't wait for the next chapter(as always).
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From Violence on May 11, 2009
Aww, look at that. She already can't sleep without the future wifey in the same bed, lol. Oh even better they both don't sleep too well. I loved that little insight on Jeanne and Kelly's life before Carrie. It's a nice touch. Such lucky girls, I wish skipping would have been that easy for me. Of course Carrie found the loophole. They'd probably die without out of school contact for two weeks. Lmao, at Kelly throwing the bible through a window. Oh Carrie... is that a hint of jealously being detected in your actions? Does she not realize Ashley ain't got a snowballs chance in hell with Kelly?
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From ANON - sugar on May 11, 2009
beautiful. :)
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From Violence on May 05, 2009
I'm so proud of Stephan for making up with Carrie and admiting he was wrong. Complete justification. Nooooo. I don't want Carrie to go back home. She should live with Kelly forever and ever, lol. Nah, I get why Carrie wants to go back and she should even if it's just for her dad because the man already has a limited happiness, Carole's a controling bitch, and Carrie's the only good thing that can hold a conversation in that house. Oh wow, Kelly should get curious more often. "Um, sure, just maybe, not now." Hahahah, she's lying. The real translation of that statement would be "I won't be able to control myself if you do that." Kelly's making Carrie all hot and bothered and she doesn't even know it.
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From greens28 on May 04, 2009
So sweet togther.. They are so in love...but so youing a foolish. It is cute to see Carrie get so turned on..but still trying to be respectful of Kelly..not letting on that she really wants to make love to her...Great job-looking forward to the next update.
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From ANON - teeny27 on May 04, 2009
you have no idea how much this story rocks. oh my gosh. i just love it so, so much! this last chapter was great. it was sad, but so sweet when carrie was telling kelly that she was going to go back home. i just love how protective kelly is with making sure she really wanted to and all. i'm glad that carrie finally got to talk with her dad. i hope that he can make a difference with her mom, but we'll have to see. otherwise, i can't help but think she'll be right back at kelly's. and the last scene.. wow..
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From ANON - me123 on May 01, 2009
Came across this story, and LOVE it! I really like how you're writing the relationship between Kelly and Carrie, and all the various problems that they're faced with. Looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the great work! :)
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From Violence on April 18, 2009
I actually thought it was great that Stephan came to Kelly and saw his error. Even though his probably frequent guilt trips screw with his better judgement sometimes. Hazing. Carrie. Naw. Lol, I really loved that Kelly immediately got all protective of her. Would love to see her kick a couple of those girls asses. '"Thanks, Baby," she replied softly.Kelly smiled, winking before she turned to take her normal spot in the bleachers.' They're so completely gay for each other! Oh dear, Carole being at that game was freaky. Rofl, "The point is to win." The bathroom meeting was just amazing. Must have reread it about seven times because it made me go aw. Haha, I wouldn't wanna be left alone with her either. I'm so happy that Stephen stood his ground and didn't let Carole take her. Also Kelly's fiery side came out to play for a little bit there. The last section I'm not even going to try and describe. Just whoa.
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From willjames52 on April 14, 2009
I love that this is set in hs. In other stories Ashley has to be mature, she's the best friend/helper in getting Kelly and Carrie together; but in this story she gets to be the adversary/force pushing them together. I think Jessica just needs to take a few steps back from the situation and leave it for a while. It's hard not to help your friends, but Kelly doesn't want her help. So even if Ashley is telling Jessica to do things, which I don't think she is, the fact that Ash and Kel want different things means she should leave it. Especially since she thinks Carrie's wrong to mess with Kelly and that it will hurt Kelly somehow. If that's the case, then she shouldn't get into the issues between Ashley and Kelly because there's romantic feelings there and someone is bound to get hurt there also. I hope Steve wasn't waiting at the bar for too long. I'm still mad that he cheated, but I imagine sitting at a bar, with the way his life is, must be pretty depressing.
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From greens28 on April 08, 2009
Man, this is 1 of my fav fics. I love how U are writing th eprogression of their realtionship. It seems very real. I think U are doing a great job of telling a story that is believable & romantic & interesting at the same time. Can't wait to read more.
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From Violence on April 07, 2009
Ashley needs to tone that jealousy down a couple notches. I love how they comfort each other. Lol at "Yea, lucky for us the other team sucked worse than we did." It sucks that Carrie's getting all this flack for kissing Kelly but I understand where Jessica's coming from. Before her Kelly had zero experience and then Carrie comes along and it's like bam. I disagree on the stopping thing. They should continue for a long, long time. Jesus, I can only imagine Ashley's reaction if she ever found out, lol. It'd be a cross between shocked and pissed, not to mention a huge hole being blown through her ego. Uh oh, Kelly's in trouble if Stephen has bad intentions. Okay, so I understand that he's in a wheelchair and all but that doesn't mean he still can't kidnap her.
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From willjames52 on April 02, 2009
So I've been busy writing papers, sorry for not saying something sooner. I didn't expect for Carrie's dad to be gay, but I was more shocked by the fact that he cheated. Carrie's mom still sucks, but that sucks. The fact that Carrie isn't supposed to know, and that she hasn't talked to her sisters makes sense for why she's grown attatched to Kelly so fast, besides their attraction for each other. I still say Kelly knows there's somethign between them but is too scared to say it, like Carrie is.
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From KindlyUnspoken on March 31, 2009
Second stop on the mass review. I am glad that Jeanne stuck up for Carrie being old enough to make her own decisions in chapter 39. It really shows that Jeanne is the better mother in this. Hahaha. And I'm glad Kelly's slowly opening up to Carrie by letting her listen to some songs, though Because of You is a lot, I must agree. The teaching scenes are slowly leading to something more, that's for sure. Kelly, Kelly, Kelly, what a smartass we have here. She will do anything to rile Carole up... as she should. And her being flustered at the end was too cute. The last chapter... poor Carrie, trying to gently explain all this while not trying to let Kelly know something more may be happening. And I love the flip on the "thinking" comment, Kelly sure is a smart one. Haha. Damn, talk about a 'whoa!' moment. Never saw that one coming, but damn, great plot twist that really explains so much about Carole's attitude towards Kelly and most things Carrie wants to do. I am glad though that by Carrie opening up, Kelly did too, and that's always a great thing.
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