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Reviews for Prisoner

By : NativeAngel54321
  • From Lemuria on October 11, 2016

    I really liked this story. Well written.


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  • From ANON - Allie Moore on November 04, 2015
    Contrary to what anyone may say, this is rape, pure and simple. The girl DIDN'T WANT IT, if you couldn't tell right from the beginning. The only reason she was climaxing and stuff and "enjoying" it towards the end is because sometimes your body does things like that during sex, whether you like or not, and you can't stop it. Any woman being dominated (or should I say degraded) by any man, whether it's one guy, two, or more, is a HUGE turn-off for me, and completely contradicts what a normal, healthy relationship is supposed to be. This story is NOT romantic or sexy in any way. It glorifies abuse. And that is a bad thing.

    No, I'm not a prude, I think sex is perfectly fine . . . if it involves two people in a stable relationship, and, of course, if it's between two consenting adults. This was evidently not consent, and the only reason this girl even gave into it was because she was pressured and eventually forced into it. She realized she was trapped and had no other choice. Is that the sort of message you want women to get?!?!?!

    And so may I conclude this review by saying that if you REALLY want to write a sexy story, why not write it with two people who are in a loving and consensual relationship instead of this Fifty Shades of Grey-esque crap?? It would be a whole lot easier to read, trust me. :)

    Best regards,
    Allie "The Raging Feminist" Moore
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  • From Number9Dream on November 11, 2008
    Wow, your sex scenes are impeccably written. And I especially like this one. Amazing. I hope you publish more stories.
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