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By : TaimaMarie

From ANON - Jenny on January 18, 2010
Are you gonna update this anymore? I'm waiting for the next chapter. It's so good!
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From CassandraMalfoy on July 23, 2009
LestatWhore this story is awesome.
I can't wait til you update it again asap. :D
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From ANON - Amy on July 08, 2009
Fast updates...I love it! And I think they should find out the sex at the next ultrasound. I don't like the whole wanting it to be a surprise thing that parents do, haha.
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From ANON - Amy on July 08, 2009
An update! How cute are these two? Good job again, looking forward to the next one.
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From oliversangel on July 07, 2009
Awww. Poor girl. This line however....was brilliant. "He came home smelling of success and hotdogs." I love you. LOL. I can't wait until the ultrasound. Ooh! I'm so excited, and I'm so glad you feel like fan fic again. ^.^

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From ANON - Amy on June 23, 2009
Wow, I really do love this story. Hope to see more chapters soon!!!
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From ANON - Loyal Jenny on June 11, 2009
This is such a great story! Please write more!
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From oliversangel on April 07, 2009
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! That totally made up for his behavior in the last chapter. That was so sweet. Criss is a good boy. I love how everyone is picking up on the clues on how he feels about her, but him. He's still a bit clueless, granted, yes, he cares about her and whatnot, but I don't think he knows he LURVES her. ^.^ This was simply lovely darling, as always I can't wait to read more, and I hope your exam goes well for you so you aren't so stressed anymore.

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From oliversangel on April 05, 2009
LOL. Wow, see what college does to you? It fries your brain. LOL. Let that be a lesson to us all!! LOL. Glad that they had a talk, but sad, because Marilyn is so hurt, and Criss is kind of confuzzled, well, only slighty. It was sweet that he stayed there all day and all night with her. Sweet also, that he was concerned about getting her a bigger bed and baby furniture. I can't help but wonder though, how long it's going to be, before he realizes he doesn't want her and his baby sleeping in an attic. It was beyond adorable that he kissed her tummy, and hoped the baby was aware of it. He can be a doll when he wants to be. And I really hope that's the last time he hurts Marilyn, because next time, it won't be a paddle, next time, I'm going to bring out the heavy artillery....maybe I will borrow Lenny's whip. ^.^

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From oliversangel on March 30, 2009
Yay!! *jumps up and down squeeing excitedly* An update!! I tried to type a review last night, but Baxter the Internet ghost ate it. He seems to like fucking with me a lot, the evil bastard. Yes, you were right on about the heart beat, and if I recall the weeks properly, she's also right on schedule for that too. That was just too sweet, Criss tearing up at the sound of his baby's heart beat like that. It takes a pretty strong man not to get emotional at hearing the baby's heartbeat for the first time and seeing it on the ultrasound as well. I loved Marilyn's declarations about having to make sure the baby is looked after by doctors. That exchange made me laugh out loud. And the second chapter...*sighs* Oh Criss. You naughty naughty boy. I'm sorry, but I warned you....*bends Criss over knee and paddles him again* Just like a man to panic and shirk his duties as a father, and want to have "one last hurrah". I hate men like that. Actually, I hate men in general when it comes to being knocked up. They're so insensitive, they don't have to make any sacrifices or suffer at all. They got a roll in the hay and a good nights sleep. We get stretch marks, permanent bitch mode for nine months, (and after for lack of sleep and more of the same hormones) 20-40 extra pounds, hot flashes, weird cravings, being intensely uncomfortable when the baby begins tumbling around at 8 months like a freaking cirque de soliel acrobat....they don't have to do a damn thing, and I'm not even talking about the birth yet. Oh, and what drives me bat shit insane is when those stupid modern guys announce, "We're pregnant." "We're" not anything. Assholes. LOL. Anywho, I can't believe Criss was talking to his ex. Or that he didn't tell Marilyn about her to begin with. I wonder what kind of conversation they are going to have when you update again. I hope it involves lots of groveling, and she makes him suffer big time!! The nerve of him.

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From oliversangel on February 01, 2009
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! That was the freaking sweetest thing ever. He found what he was looking for. And he was worried about being a good daddy. And he missed his daddy. Poor Criss. *gives Criss a big bear hug* I love that Marilyn likes to watch Arthur. It's a cute show. ^.^ So glad her morning sickness is subsiding. I can't wait to read more. Oh, so glad that Criss didn't want an angry pregnant woman after him, they aren't a rational lot. LOL. Love you!!! XXOO
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From oliversangel on January 25, 2009
I shrieked with glee when I saw the update!! Hurray!! Marilyn's reaction to his basket was just perfect. So sweet. And a date. Yay!! And it
*was* a careful one. LOL. I loved her outfit by the way. But you knew that. LOL. I loved Criss's reaction to it too. I just love Criss. Let's make Criss Angel cupcakes. I am not sure how we would get the most important ingrediant....someone said that in one of my reviews. I would love some JD cupcakes too. And House ones too. OK, I need to stop now, cause I am getting all kinds of inapropriate here. LOL. Naughty thoughts. Things like doing a certain thing until ears are bleeding. LOL. Is there going to be new CA? I need to see him. LOL. I am jumping all over the place, I have been cleaning like a demon all day, and had lots of blast your ass of espresso, and I have scads of energy, and I'm just sitting on the bed with my PC, and I'm about to vibrate out of my skin here. LOL. Love you!!
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From oliversangel on January 11, 2009
*puts paddle away* I thought I was going to have to spank him again. I thought, obviously this man is stubborn and didn't learn his lesson the first time, or he is just a masochist. Thankfully, he did. ^.^ I love your witty and random comments. "Well what are you going to do with the baby?" "I don't know, give birth to it, feed it, water it a little...." LOL. I'm glad that he didn't bring up abortion as an option. So Criss, here is a cookie. *hands Criss a cookie* You know what I think? I think Criss should do some research on morning sickness, and bring her some remedies for it. Sour candies, or maybe some candied ginger. That's helpful too. Yeah, it *is* kind of dangerous to do a DNA test in utero, but they *are* done, and that's why they wait until the mother is further along, so there is less risk of miscarriage, and poking the baby with the needle. As always, I can't wait for more. ^.^ XXOO
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From oliversangel on January 10, 2009
I knew it!! Beware the wrath of DIMITRA!!! LOL. Mother's always know just what to say to make you feel like shit don't they? And *THE* *VERY* *WORSE* thing a parent can say to you is, "I'm not mad, I'm just disappointed." Oh God!! I've heard that a few times. HEARTBREAKING!!! I'm glad that Criss brought her flowers, and well, he didn't apologize yet, but it's a start I guess. I hope he doesn't think that the flowers gets him off scot free. But at least she let him in to talk. They *COULD* do a paternity test before the baby is born, in like the 2nd trimester or so so. They can do it by amniocentisis. (sp) They take a sample of amniotic fluid and test it, b/c the baby sheds skin cells inside the womb. Icky fact....the first poo that babies make, is mostly composed of the hair and skin cells they shed. YUCK!! LOL. As always, I can't wait to read more!! XXOO
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From oliversangel on January 09, 2009
Of course he was going to deny it. And I'm glad his mom put him in his place about everything. His comment about her barfing, and making him leave. But I have a feeling that isn't going to be the end of it from Dimitra. Nope, not by a long shot. LOL. I can imagine that any male woudl panic in that situation, but what the men always forget, it's us who makes the sacrifices. Our bodies, our vaginas, our boobs, sleep, and they get to leave if they want to. They don't HAVE to stay. *sigh* I'm sorry to have to do this but.....*bends Criss over knees, and wallops him with a paddle* It hurt me more than it hurt you, but I did it for your own good MR. Well, can't wait to read more.XXOO
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