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Reviews for night time talks

By : writer101
  • From ctallent on April 11, 2009
    great update, very sweet. go kelly for putting jeanne in her place....keep em coming
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  • From Violence on April 10, 2009
    I liked this update because there wasn't so much going on. It was mainly Jeanne being quiet and Kelly/Carrie talking, two very entertaining things. Lol at watching over 60's naked on the beach because you know that's what dreams are made of, haha. The talk of kids was beautiful, just beautiful.
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  • From greens28 on April 08, 2009
    I really do love all your fics & they are all fantastic-But I think this one is my FAV. Man, the parents walking in on them was funny as hell. I am glad that Carrie finally had the chance to set Kelly's mom straight(no pun meant). I am also glad that Kelly gave carrie the space to talk to her mother & didn't try to stop here..but let her have her say. I think they are going in the right direction. Awesome job..I am loving it & can't wait for an update. Also, liked the end..Carrie gave it a try & Kelly said no chance in hell...I am sure Kelly's mom would have had an heart attack if she heard them having sex again.
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  • From Violence on April 07, 2009
    That's gotta be the worst turn off ever as well being extremely embarassing. I was hoping they'd be able to finish but alas my hopes were crushed and shattered into a million tiny pieces by none other than Jeanne, lol. Thanks lady. And lol at Carole getting in on some of the Jeanne insulting action. If I was Carrie I'd call her a hella lot worse things than just a stupid old woman. Sometimes I still can't help but stare at the screen in amazement that Jeanne hasn't figured out/accepted that her daughter is very, very gay and in love. Makes me wonder how she ever made it through that wedding. Unless she wasn't there which would make sense why she was forced to forever hold her peace. Flashback suggestion, maybe?
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  • From ctallent on April 07, 2009
    great update, i love this story so much...i am so glad they are trying to work things out...jeanne needs to leave....update soon
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  • From Violence on April 04, 2009
    The first part of this was great with Kelly and Ashley trying to out do each other, Jason stuffing his face, and Ashley, period. It's chapters like these that make me feel like the update, sad and sweet. Good things are happening but the underlying tone is bittersweet. Yea, Kelly what're you're true feelings? ''It's there baby......try looking harder..........' Lol, defintely something she would say. woohoo! Date. Progress. Yes.
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  • From ctallent on April 03, 2009
    thank you thank you thank you... great updates, very sweet...loving it..
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  • From ctallent on March 30, 2009
    please please tell you are not done with these stories. pleeeeease update soooon..
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  • From Violence on March 22, 2009
    I can't say anything about the beginning that hasn't already been said. It was so cute and yet heart breaking at the same time because Carrie's so scared of fucking up again. I completely laughed my ass off at Jason and Ashley having sex on the bus where Kelly and Carrie can very clearly hear them. 'Their animals......' That line got me laughing even more. But I love how Carrie distracted her. Especially with a memory that great and aww worthy. I hope that when Kelly wakes up and Jason and Ashley are done they can do out there and bust on them. Revenge.
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  • From greens28 on March 21, 2009
    U are the reason that I am checking this site everyday for updates. U are starting to spoil me writing so many updates at once...I sure am not complaining. I love their flashbacks-so sweet & emotional. Carrie needs to ralaize that Kelly messed up also-all their problems were not Carrie's fault. Great job. Off to read other updates...Thanks so much.
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  • From Violence on March 21, 2009
    Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou. You saved my sanity, lol. Damn, had Carrie actually let Amy on the bus I would have gone batshit and bitched about it. But thank god, Carrie's common sense kicked in at the last minute. AND Kelly successfully defended/reined in her woman. Good thing Kelly knocked that bitch down about 50 notches or so. Lmao, at Carrie messig with Ashley. Too funny. Carrie should get one free slap upside the head from Ashley for being oblivious. Super hapy that they finally talked about it and that Kelly stayed. And as your endings usually are, that was cute.
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  • From greens28 on March 19, 2009
    U are leaving all these latest updates with major DRAMA & SUSPENSE. Man, I hope Kelly doesn't get the wrong idea & jump ahead of herself & assume that Carrie is allready sleeping with that SKANK Amy. I can't wait to read more. Jason is so sweet by the way..I love how U write him as well & Ashley also...O.K. I just Love it ALL.
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  • From Violence on March 19, 2009
    For some reason i felt the need to pull my hair out on this one. maybe it has something to do with the fact that Carrie's a fucking moron. Jason is too. Both of them deserve to have a bit of sense knocked into them. Why the hell would you even think about letting the woman your wife thinks you're cheating on her with get 25 feet within the bus you will be sleeping on? Absolute retard. I would say she is going to successfully knock them back to square one or maybe she'll screw it up all the way. Amy needs to take a hint... or at least have Kelly chase after her with a heavy/sharp object. I dread Kelly's reaction.
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  • From Violence on March 18, 2009
    I really really hope that Jason being there will stop Carrie from accidentally making a wrong move. And I also hope does Amy get fired. What an ass. Woo, I'm so glad Kelly showed up. I laughed the whole time Ashley was bitching about the seats. I love, love, loved that part of Carrie singing Be Still. My December is one of the most underrated albums ever. Wow, Amy's an uber bitch and the security guards are idiots. Though I'm curious as to why Kelly doesn't carry arouund some id. It sucks that Kelly's being denied Carrie when she finally felt compelled to go to her. Hopefully Jason or someone can get Kelly in. Because someone's going to be getting a nice sized dose of Kelly rage.
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  • From greens28 on March 18, 2009
    Man 4 stories now!! They are all good & different. I don't know where you keep coming up with the great ideas. I think this one is my fav, No the new one, No...O.K. U get the point I love them all. Great job!!!!
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