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Reviews for night time talks

By : writer101
  • From Violence on February 18, 2009
    Okay, so this started off amazingly enough with them getting along AND having sex. Major plus there. Lol at Carrie giving Jakob away just so she could have her way with her wife. And then at the very end you throw a curve ball like that and make it a dreadful CLIFFHANGER. I hate cliffies, they're absolute toture. But wow, that was heat stopping and wince worthy when Kelly told Carrie to come home. I'ma thinking Carrie's in deep shit. And how the hell did Kelly figure it out? Sure, Carrie's not the most subtle and unobvious person in the world but I didn't think it was that obvious... or maybe Kelly knew all along. Sneaky.
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  • From greens28 on February 18, 2009
    Very interesting...So Kelly knows. Great job-I am loving this. Keep up the good work...
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  • From Violence on February 16, 2009
    Yup, pretty damn sure Carrie using the knowledge of Kelly being her internet friend is only gonna backfire. If there's one thing I've learned from reading fics for so long is that good things rarely stay that way. But at least she's using it for the well being of her relationship. Can't hate her for wanting to fix her marriage. The flashback was sweet as hell. Makes me understand a bit more about Kelly's lack of faith in Carrie. Hope Carrie doesn't make it seem painfully obvious that she's really on the other end of that IM by doing something like that the next day. Might really make Kelly raise an eyebrow.
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  • From Violence on February 14, 2009
    Loved that they were teasing each other through most of the chapter. And the way Ashley totally pawned her son off to Carrie the moment she was sure she wouldn't give him back, lol. That song was almost like the final nail in a coffin. So sad.
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  • From Violence on February 14, 2009
    I love how much humor this story has. I often find myself cackling my ass off. Carrie's such a smartass but she puts her foot in her mouth hella lot and I oddly love that. Kelly's also certifiably insane, lol. She's crazy but regardless they are absolutely adorable and sweet together. The wedding flashbacks were beautiful and it makes me wonder how they could go from that to this without realizing it. Love final paragraph.
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  • From Mo56 on February 12, 2009
    this story is getting sooo good
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  • From sugar on February 11, 2009
    i love that kelly decided to join the tour and that they'll have their own bus. and it's so cute that she wants them to have a "normal" life. again i love the whole plot of the fic. :D can't wait for the next update!
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  • From Mo56 on February 11, 2009
    that was adorable
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  • From Violence on February 10, 2009
    Yes!!! So damn happy Kelly said yes to Carrie's offer. Even better though that they get a tour bus all to themselves... and Marty. Carrie's getting the chance to prove her loyalty so i hope she doesn't fuck it up. Lmao, scarbble. really? "'So I win then?..' Carrie shouted after her." lol, could definitely see that happening. Awww, the ending was adorable. Love it.
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  • From Violence on February 09, 2009
    That was cute when they were trying to figure out what to name the baby. LMAO, I can't believe you took the Jeanne/Graham thing to heart. You get major awesome points for that, too cool. YEAH!!! I'm completely excited by the fact that they had sex after so long. Go get 'em girls. Awwwww, they finally said 'I love you' while sober and the ending was great. Loved the whole thing. Not that I don't already love everything you write but yeah, you get the point.
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  • From Mo56 on February 09, 2009
    kelly don't say anything! i want things to get better
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  • From Violence on February 09, 2009
    Hahahahaha, Ashley's hilarious for telling Kelly no to the baby talk and Jason for the one night stand thing. Kelly has horrible timing. But she made up for it because her and Carrie talking about having kids together was utterly adorable. LMAO!! That whole part about breasts had me cracking up. Oh shiiiiiiiiiit. I can't help but feel as if Kelly completely overheard what Carrie and Jason were talking about. Jason's right though, Kelly would probably go bonkers and kick Carrie out.
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  • From Violence on February 08, 2009
    "Carrie felt like choking the older woman." Me too Carrie, me too. Damn! Kelly knew? I feel bad for Jason and I still really wanna know how he and Ashley got together and why the hell he wasn't there for her throughout her pregnancy. My heart broke a little when Kelly said she maybe she couldn't be convinced of Carrie's faithfulness. I like that Carrie's actually using her knowledge for good but I have a feeling that if Kelly ever found out she'd feel betrayed. Gah, that flashback was so fucking cute. Finally! We have the problem. and now that Carrie knows she should fire that women's ass. Woohoo! Yay for Carrie making a move and trying to fix it.
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  • From Mo56 on February 07, 2009
    yay! carrie is totally going to win her back!
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  • From Violence on February 04, 2009
    I was right! Jason's totally the babies daddy. wonder how that one came about and why the hell isn't he there with Ashley? Awww, so maybe Jeanne's not that bad. Just a royal bitch. Whoa, Jason and Jeanne don't get along either? Damn, Carrie laughed right in her face, lol. Maybe Jeanne's got a little affair going on with Graham? Probably not but it'd hilarious if it were true. I like that Carrie could defuse that Kelly bomb before it grew. i'm eagerly waiting for the next one.
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