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By : writer101
  • From Violence on February 01, 2009
    Ashley!!! lololol. that girl's too funny. Jeanne is the devil. Graham is a lackey. I'm convinced. Yay, for Kelly finally stading up to her mom. Once again Ashley saves the day. woohoo! Oh Carrie... so close. Jason... Ashley? wow, so Jason either got Ashley preggers, broke her heart, or died. I wanna know why she's crying over Jason. lovely update.
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  • From sugar on January 29, 2009
    "'Ashley.....you have to push...' Carrie didn't know if she really did or not, she was now quoting er scripts."

    haha loved that line. and of course the little part with kelly sitting on her lap
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  • From Violence on January 26, 2009
    Hahaha. That opening line was great. "you put wood in the fire and it burns" lmao. Jeanne is a bitch... can we kill her? Yes, I have noticed that we reviewers have a thing for wanting to kill people who mess with the lovelyness of Carrie/Kelly. The flashbacks were so damn cute. I squeed. I want to thank you for not torturing us, not teasing us, and not making us wait in giddy anticipation. I'm so relieved that at least one of them found out. And I loved that they were able to spend a nice afternoon together without fighting. I really love that Carrie found out though. Made my day. Practically on my knees praying that she does the right thing with this info.
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  • From Mo56 on January 25, 2009
    omg graham is a pig! good for kelly dumping him! now if only her and carrie could find that happy place again!! lol
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  • From greens28 on January 25, 2009
    Great job-I having a hard time getting my review to take for some reason. Love your writing style.
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  • From Mo56 on January 23, 2009
    i hate that there are moments when they seem like they're trying to improve...then they just fall back on the dysfunctional ways...more please
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  • From sugar on January 23, 2009
    i really, really enjoy this story.
    but i agree i wouldn't mind jeanne and graham getting killed off hehe
    can't wait for the next update :)




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  • From Violence on January 22, 2009
    Shit. I got a little misty eyed during that last part. So angsty. Yeah... Jeanne and Graham need to get killed off as well. Tornado maybe? Perhaps hurricane Carrie? I love that Carrie talked a little bit about their problems even though she was wasted. hopefully, she'll make Kelly stop doubting their relationship so much.
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  • From Mo56 on January 19, 2009
    i love their flashbacks. can't wait for more
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  • From Violence on January 11, 2009
    That was a cute one. I loved seeing Kelly and Carrie interacting normally instead of having WWIII. Go Kelly! Sticking up for your woman for both your mom and a douchebag employee. Ashley the intermediate saves the day once again. The ending was beautiful.
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  • From Mo56 on January 11, 2009
    good! this is getting good! we want them happy!
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  • From sugar on January 08, 2009
    still loving it. can't wait for the next one :)
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  • From Mo56 on January 08, 2009
    this is a painfully beautiful story. i don't want to see them like this...but i can't stop reading. just tell me that things get better and they really do live happily ever after? lol
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  • From Violence on January 07, 2009
    Wow. That was really heart tugging. I feel so, so bad for Carrie. Then again I feel for Kelly too. But really it's both of their faults and neither one of them is even attempting to reach out. Carrie's timid and Kelly's angry. If Carrie and Kelly ever find out who's really on the other end of that IM it'd be a mircale. Still love this though, I just hope you don't break them up... too much.
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  • From greens28 on January 07, 2009
    I am very intrigued by your fan fic. I think you are off to a really great start. I think there is so much you can do with this story & I can't wait to see what direction that you take it...I think it is realy cute that they are kinda cheating on each other with each other-Classic...PLEASE continue soon...
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