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Reviews for Baby Can I Hold You

By : writer101
  • From Violence on February 08, 2009
    No!!!! Kelly, what the flying fuck are you doing!? You know that abusive husbands always come home early when they're not supposed to. And the next thing you know you're getting beaten with a baseball bat. Unbelievble. Carrie's a bit stupid for leaving Kelly by herself. Elle was all cute backing her bears. Hell, most of this chapter was sweet. You really need to update though 'cause I wanna know if Kelly makes it out alive. Here's to hoping Kelly and Carrie make it.
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  • From Mo56 on February 07, 2009
    NONONONONNO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT THE HELL?!?! KELLY CAN'T BE LEFT ALONE! please don't let anything happen to her!!
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  • From Violence on February 04, 2009
    All hail Carrie. She's pretty damn amazing here. And she's got the flirting on high. yay. I hope Kelly doesn't get scared enough to not runaway with Carrie and Elle. That last line was really, really cute. can't wait for more.
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  • From Violence on February 01, 2009
    I think I love Carrie. So damn sweet. Paul is such a prick. how could he be so cruel to his own daughter? I think 70032 and I are still waiting for that bus... or that freak heartattack. love this story though.
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  • From Mo56 on January 29, 2009
    alright! go carrie!
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  • From Violence on January 26, 2009
    That. Was. Beautiful. I love that Carrie finally found out and made a move. It was damn glorious. But uh something tells me the next chapter isn't going to be so pleasant. Hopefully Carrie's got her blunt object ready to go.
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  • From Mo56 on January 26, 2009
    OH! MY! GOD!!!!!!!!
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  • From Mo56 on January 25, 2009
    best chapter ending so far
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  • From greens28 on January 25, 2009
    very emotional update. I loved it-this fic is very different & I like it. Carrie needs o take her Louisville Slugger to Paul. Awesome job-look forward to reading more.
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  • From Mo56 on January 23, 2009
    i was serious about that bus comment...when?
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  • From sugar on January 23, 2009
    i really loved the part with their on each other's hearts. so cute!

    this too

    "..' not one bit, im too busy missing someone else to think about sarah.....and right now im not missing anything,for the first time in a long time I feel like everything is in its right place..... "

    great job!
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  • From Violence on January 22, 2009
    Someone really needs to kill that bastard. xD And Kelly, Kelly, Kelly. what the fuck are you doing? Grab the girls and run. far far away. This is why abuse stories frustrate me. i can't understand how anyone would let someone knock their self esteem to shit or let their lives be completely over run. it's just one guy right? how much damage could he possibly do? then again when people get debilitated by fear it goes to the extreme and beyond. how Carrie doesn't see the fakeness of Paul and the fear in Kelly is amazing. then again she always was the dense one. can't wait to see how far you take this.
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  • From Mo56 on January 19, 2009
    so when does paul "accidentally" get hit by a bus?
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  • From sugar on January 16, 2009
    loved it.

    btw what happened "night time talks"? :'(
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  • From Violence on January 11, 2009
    WTF? why would she not leave him the first time he hit her? It's not like she actually loves the guy. lol, why does no one ever listen to Ashley. she's the voice of reason. Holy shit! Kelly has a baby!? I would have gotten the little girl and RAN. I'm sure Carrie would be more than willing to take them.
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