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Reviews for Baby Can I Hold You

By : writer101
  • From Mo56 on January 11, 2009
    holy shit dude, intense much?
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  • From sugar on January 09, 2009
    oh wow! another one? you're spoiling us. i really liked it. especially this part:

    "Turning the corner into the kitchen she could finally see what had been keeping him at the table and not making his way towards her the minute he heard her entering. There sitting at her table was the thing she loved most in the world sitting across from the thing she hated most."
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  • From Mo56 on January 08, 2009
    BIG, GIANT--QUESTION MARK!!!!!!
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  • From Violence on January 08, 2009
    YES!! Haha. This is awesome. Another fabulous idea that totally needs to be fleshed out and continued. Man, poor Kelly. I can tell she's gonna be the pain barer in your stories. Can't wait to see how she came to love Carrie and why she's still married to a douchebaggy wife beater. You can never have too many Kelly/Carrie stories no matter how dark the subject is.
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