Click Here!

Reviews for The Secrets Between us

By : writer101
  • From Violence on April 20, 2009
    wow. First part left me in a puddle. Hahahah, that's right bring in Jeanne. *rubs hands* This oughta be good. And Jason's being a little bitch, lol.
    Report Review

  • From ctallent on April 19, 2009
    jason needs to mind his own business, they just now got back together and he is gonna screw things up.... maybe kelly loves carrie enough to fight for her....
    Report Review

  • From Violence on April 18, 2009
    What a dumbass. His plan should either backfire or go too well. Teach him a lesson. I love that Carrie was watching Kelly. And I also loved how she acknowledged that they're in love but not ready to be labeled and outed. It's bitter sweet.
    Report Review

  • From Violence on April 15, 2009
    I honestly thought Kelly would freak the fuck out. I can gladly say that I'm pleasantly surpirised. It feels damn good to be wrong sometimes. Glad they're back together. Oh damn son. Ashley and Jason are secretly together too? Awesome. Those Clarksons need to learn to communicate though, lol. This also makes Ashley even more open though which should do Kelly and Carrie some good in the future.
    Report Review

  • From ctallent on April 14, 2009
    yay, perfect update... now maybe kelly will beat clives ass.... hope things start to look up for them...thanks for the update
    Report Review

  • From ctallent on April 14, 2009
    carrie needs to confess the whole clive thing and kelly needs to just tell her she still loves her.... cant wait for an update....
    Report Review

  • From Violence on April 12, 2009
    Oh Carrie. You are so fucked my girl. Moron. Bring on the heartbreak. Kelly's gonna feel hurt and betrayed, then proceed to get pissed and/or freak out. The beginning was fucking hilarious though. Yay for the Ashley teasing of Kelly.
    Report Review

  • From Violence on April 09, 2009
    And in the same instant my hopes and dreams come crashing down. I like that though, story can't always be all sushine and gumdrops, gotta build the suspense and the drama, not to mention the stupidity within the characters that's become almost like a trademark of fanfic. It always works though. Because Kelly just made one huge fucking mistake. Once an asshole always an asshole. Carrie's just wallowing right now and I would be to if I was being tugged around and given as many mixed signals as she's recieved. Carrie and drinking; not so pleasant history? But idiot of the day easily goes to Kelly this time. Girl left me utterly flabbgasted.
    Report Review

  • From greens28 on April 08, 2009
    Just had a chance to catch up & read the last 2 chapters. Things are moving along nicely. U are doing a great job-I loved that Carrie is taking up for Kelly against Nathan.
    Report Review

  • From Violence on April 07, 2009
    Lol. I spoke too soon. Nathan is an asshole. I love that Kelly let Carrie take her in and comfort her. This version of Jason needs a smack in the back of the head. So dense and in denial. Sigh. Glad that Ashley's at least sorta objective. What I really, really loved about this was that Carrie went after Nathan and attacked his ass, even after Kelly told her not to. Something tells me Kelly's not as pleased about that as I am.
    Report Review

  • From Violence on April 04, 2009
    I'm trying really, really hard to hate Nathan but I can't because the guy is completely innocent in all this. And I'll feel bad for him, unless he turns out to be an asshole, because he'll be falling for Kelly while she's stuck on Carrie. I must admit I am digging the idea of making Carrie insanely jealous just to push her to the edge and see if she tells Kelly the truth or not. On the other hand I don't like seeing Carrie get depressed, angry, and sad because she let her girl go for what I don't know. Judging by the ending and the talk of forgeting, me thinks she's either gonna sleep with him or freak out.
    Report Review

  • From Violence on March 22, 2009
    For the most part I agree with what greens said. Kelly's gonna be distracting herself with Nathan while trying to get over Carrie. Wow, Kelly's being so cold to Carrie. I feel bad for Carrie 'cause she thought they were finally gonna work on it but all Kelly did was run and give Carrie the cold shoulder. Wonder how long that's going to last when they go on tour. I do hope to find out about that agreement soon though. And Clive's still one creepy mofo, lol.
    Report Review

  • From greens28 on March 21, 2009
    Damn, Clive is all kind of stalker crazy. Carrie need to hire security & get those locks changed. It is all kinds of wrong for him to be coming & going in her house. Can we all so creepy. Nice update though...Kelly is gonna date Nathan as a buffer & rub it all in Carrie's face. Her text back to Carrie was just way harsh. Kelly will feel like a jackass when she finds out the reason why Carrie did what she did about the Clive situation. can't wait for more tomorrow!! Please?
    Report Review

  • From Violence on March 21, 2009
    What the fuck? That's the only thing I can really think right now. Nothing makes sense. It was sweet of Carrie to wanna make breakfast for Kelly, too bad her ass gonna be long gone by the time she gets back. So the thing that really stumped me was Clive showing up... again. He seriously creeps me the fuck out with that showing up in Carrie's bedroom thing... sexual harrasment anyone? And the fact that he's being a huge douche only makes it worse. Yeah, and with the way Clive was talking it made me think that he's making Carrie have a forced affair with him. That kind of idea has the power to make me laugh, wince, and gag all at the same time. But dammit, I wanna know what that agreement is. And why Carrie is hell bent on not letting Kelly know?
    Report Review

  • From greens28 on March 19, 2009
    Wow!!!!! U are on a writing roll. Updating All your stories like 3 days in a row...that is awesome. The creative juices must really be flowing. Very sweet...but I think hell is going to break loose when Kelly wakes up the next day & when they both find out Kelly has been set up on a blind date. I smell DRAMA!!! Well, I am off to read your other updates..
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!