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By : writer101
  • From Violence on March 19, 2009
    Holy shit. That was not what I expected at all. But damn am I glad it happened. I love how you made that little distiction about how Kelly wouldn't be doing this if she didn't want to. Smart move. Now I don't really know what to think but I feel that Jason's plan is going to either blow up in his face or Kelly will attempt to date him just to get her mind off Carrie.
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  • From Violence on March 18, 2009
    *facepalm* Jason is an idiot. Oh no. Carrie you had better be sleeping on the couch or in another bedroom if you want to still be alive the next morning. For some odd reason I just don't picture this going over too well. Although an inebriated Kelly who seems to be pushing all her inhibitions aside could make for an interesting conversation.
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  • From greens28 on March 18, 2009
    I just read the latest update to all your fics...& U did not dissappoint me at all. Awesome job-all the way around. Carrie needs to tell Kelly the truth about Clive. Keep going...
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  • From Violence on March 17, 2009
    That's gotta be at the very least mildly scary to have Clive Davis anywhere near your bedroom. Just a suggestion but would it be too much to ask for clive to "accidentally" fall down a flight of stairs? 'Cause he is a major douchebag. Yo, what's up with the whole drinking thing? does she have an actual problem (although not very probable) or was it just a way for start pushing Kelly from her life? And the plot only thickens.
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  • From Violence on March 17, 2009
    At least Jason and Ashley aren't freaking out too badly. Aw, they fell fast and hard. But that only makes me more eager to know what the hell Carrie promised Clive and what she did run Kelly out of her life. hmm, wonder who that is in her room. Although i'm banking on good ole KC it could be one of those creepy ex's Carrie's got floating around.
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  • From greens28 on March 16, 2009
    I am still loving this fic. It is cute & fun. I just have one little request. Can you please use a Capital letter for the first letter of their names when U refer to Carrie & Kelly-at least for me it makes the fic easier to read? Thanks a lot. Great update.
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  • From Kellyzhot on March 15, 2009
    I love this one! It's time for some hot action between my 2 favorite girls. Well written-please update soon.
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  • From Violence on March 12, 2009
    Lol, Ashley's always getting the front row seats to the Kelly/Carrie make out moments. Oh hell yeah. Now I'm really intrigued about how Clive has yet again managed to screw with Kelly's life and has apparently started screwing with Carrie's life as well. Carrie's too sweet sometimes. She's always taking the hits which I actually prefer to Kelly taking the hits. Carrie's totally the emotionally stable and stronger one. Touring is gonna make one of them break, I can feel it.
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  • From greens28 on March 05, 2009
    I just had achance to review your second update & I really liked it. I love how you are developing this secret between Carrie /Kelly. I also loved the reference to BHC-one of my fav Carrie songs. I look forward to reading more. Awesome job!!!
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  • From sugar on March 05, 2009
    i'm intrigued. i love broken-carrie :P
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  • From Violence on March 04, 2009
    Oh, dear writer, you kill me. Of course I'm going to say I love the idea and I want you to continue. Man, isn't Clive's ass gone now? I mean the man does look like he should have kicked the bucket well over 20 years ago. Ah, I already know what their secret is. The two of them totally had a relationship but it fell out. Good thing they never went public. Either that or they're assassins. My votes in for option one but yeah, this looks promising.
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  • From storyteller999 on March 03, 2009
    New Fic!!! Lovin it!! I wonder what the big secret it...dum dum dum!!!:D I don't know how you do it...4 stories on the go..I can hardly wrap my head around one!! You're just a big ball of talent..yup thats what you are...can't wait to read more:D:D
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