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Reviews for Afterlife

By : InJeCtXmExSwEeTlY
  • From ANON - ohavok on December 04, 2013
    great story!!! loved every bit of it, awesome!
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  • From bloodravyn on October 18, 2010
    post again, soon?
    please?!
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  • From Maggot23 on March 28, 2010
    I agree with ZipFlopOhMyGod. The story is good, but a little rushed. Even the littlest bit more detail would help out but other then that, the story's good.
    Keep up the good work and update soon ;)
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  • From Need2ScreamNow on March 27, 2010
    Hi! I like your plot but I feel like your trying to rush through it. Just reading through the first chapter I couldn't feel the characters. I'm very removed from the situation. Use setting details to bring the readers into the story so they can relate better with the characters. Losing Jimmy was a massive blow to fans and band alike I don't doubt if it had been Matt it would have been any less. You've got a great story idea, you just need to find a way to work the reader in as well.
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