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Reviews for Until You Lose Your Breath II

By : theProphet
  • From FilthyWarumono on November 07, 2010
    OMG THE END!?!?!?!??!?!??!

    I love how cuddly/cute Kyo's and Kao's relationship was. :D
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  • From leppgirl on October 28, 2010
    awww I loved it. happy everafter.
    a part 3?!?!?! oh you devil you!!! can't wait.
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  • From rivendellelf on October 28, 2010
    I do so looove a happy ending! Great story, thanks so much for sharing. I'll definitely read part 3 if you decide to move forward with that :)
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  • From rivendellelf on October 24, 2010
    yay, Shinya to the rescue!
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  • From rivendellelf on October 21, 2010
    Oh please let Shinya be running off to find Die and not stop on the way for a double shot latte and some introspective internal monologue!!
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  • From leppgirl on October 20, 2010
    OMG thank you for not making them really have sex, this is what I meant!!!!! :))))

    oh let Shinya be on his way to Die's place!!!

    HURRY with more!!!
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  • From rivendellelf on October 11, 2010
    We didn't even see much of Die in this latest chapter, but just the bit there was has me depressed. I really hope there's a happy ending, lol.
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  • From FilthyWarumono on September 28, 2010
    fjdkgdkfhjfkhjfj I love coming here adn seeing so much posted from you!!!!
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  • From rivendellelf on September 27, 2010
    OK, there is no way to say this without sounding really lame but... I didn't know that's what those +++++ signs were for (DUH!). It seems pretty obvious now... Anyway, you have the honor of being the first person I plussed. That being said, DAYAM!! I totally would have pegged Toshiya for some good old fashioned hair pulling, hee hee.
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  • From leppgirl on September 23, 2010
    DIE don't go with him!!!!

    OMG DIE NOOOoooooo!!!!!

    with Miyavi?!?!?!

    oh please since they can't remember....

    poor Shinya. poor Die and poor Toshiya!!!!!!

    did I say OMG!!!!!


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  • From rivendellelf on September 22, 2010
    Sorry if this posts twice, I'm having issues :P
    I really feel sorry for Die, he's his own worst enemy. At least he owned up, even if it was because he knew that it wasn't going to be kept his dirty little secret.
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  • From leppgirl on September 11, 2010
    AHH!! I'm on both sides!!! but don't let them break up!!!
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  • From rivendellelf on September 11, 2010
    Kaoru should look inward before accusing Kyo of being childish. Poor Kyo, he even flat out said what the problem is and Kaoru just doesn't get it. Thanks for sharing your lovely story, enjoy your day!!
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  • From leppgirl on September 05, 2010
    awe poor Die not gonna get any nookie!!! LMAO!!!!
    I can just see Die begging for it haha

    ms69 all you have to do is see how many hits have, that tells you something. as I type this you have 41 hits 2 of them are mine ;)

    can't wait for more :)
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  • From leppgirl on September 03, 2010
    yes!!!!

    well it seems that Miyavi is faithful to Toshiya but you never know lol
    awe poor Shinya, Die needs to control his drinking or his mouth or both haha

    OMG poor Miyu...oh Die's in the 'doghouse' now!!!!

    oh hurry with more!!!!
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