Reviews for Like a BossBy : MTL |
IMO, 100% submissive Paige might be the hottest thing I’ve read from your fics (It’s a three way tie between that, the Mickie/Trish chapter of “Maryse’s Love of Fat Ass”, and the entirety of ”Riverdale Oreos”). Loved every second of her in this chapter.
Sort of surprised Becky bottomed so willingly in this chapter. I was kind of hoping Lynch would eventually turn Sasha into a complete bottom, as she has definitely shown a lot of signs of submissiveness in this fic, but after this chapter, I think I’m so down with the idea of Becky being Sasha’s pet. Either way I’m here for the ride.
In rereading this today, I noticed a cool detail and I’m unsure if it was intentional. In “This Is My Ass”, AJ rules out targeting Emma privately without Paige’s permission instead opting to target Paige directly and yet by the end of the events, Paige is damaged but not completely broken. In this story, the Bellas don’t target Emma without Paige’s permission, instead taking Emma and Paige together in the same room. Sasha finally does target Emma and only Emma without getting permission from Paige, therefore doing what the other two wouldn’t resort to and finally breaks Paige because of it.
Sorry if I way overanalyzed this haha. I just love the way all of your stories connect with each other. Can’t wait for more!!
Another great chapter. Though I'll be honest I am looking forward to seeing you write a chapter and/or story of Becky on the receiving end. So will be interesting to see who Sasha either bottoms for or tops next.
Chap6 was very hot. Also I'm really looking forward to another chap of `B's butt Bitch'
Thank you for coming back to this fic and doing a wrestling fic again. Hopefully we get more but if not glad we got a chapter of Paige completely submitting.
Any chance of new stories with an updated roster divas
Any updates on part 5? Or on the rest of your Diva stories?
Great new chapter. Love Emma she is so fucking hot. Can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully Paige getting taken. Wouldn't be surprised if there is a twist maybe Becky or another diva taking both Sasha and Paige.
Also you have to do Paige/Emma/Bella's story now after teasing it in this chapter.
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