Well for Paige/Emma I do plan on having a situation where Paige and Emma have a loving relationship with Paige as the dom, but further down the line, Emma comes back with a new mentality and an aim for her Ex (because Paige tapped to Sasha so hard)

Bayley and Bliss will come in a potential NXT story.

Sasha's rival will pull strings to get back up.

Well despite returning to NXT in early 2015 I vaguely remember Emma showing up whenever the WWE wanted to lump a bunch of hot women together in a 'super classy' way, and it wouldn't be too hard to imagine the WWE 'feeding' Emma to Sasha as an easy win once Sasha was on a winning streak. Alternatively I think most people would except a little continuity cheating if you say, brought Emma and her new girlfriend Dana Brooke up early, maybe because Sasha's rival pulled some strings and got herself some back-up after most of the other divas became broken.

If not I'd love an Emma/Paige story somewhere down the road. Ideally one where they are in a loving relationship, or get into one, and while there is still domination it's done with more love and care. Like Paige making love to Emma's arse missionary style while looking into her eyes lovingly. I'd also like something similar for Mickie/Trish, Mickie/Melina, Lita/Trish and especially AJ/Kaitlyn who may be my favourite WWE pairing.

You may have noticed I have a thing for big butts, so I'd love to see stories were the likes of Mickie, Trish, Melina, Kaitlyn and others find their juicy asses jiggling like jelly from the force of the ass pounding that they are taking.

I'd also like to see Alexa Bliss, Bayley, Beth Phoenix and Maryse getting their glorious asses fucked, if not in Only Bitches Tap than in something else.

For more inspiration there is quite a few prompts on the, sadly now dead, meme kinks site: anonwrestling.livejournal

Although I recommend sticking to one story if you can. I have the attention span of a goldfish, and can't keep up with the ideas which come into my head, so I've ended up a lot of ongoing/abandoned stories.

Well I love Paige and Emma too, especially since I'm pretty sure they've done stuff (I mean, Paige is Bi). Not sure on continuity how to include her though. Although it does inspire another story....

The prequel stuff will be a self contained story in itself, if and when I get round to it. I have the idea's for it though, so expect something.

And I may take you up on that right to copy friend, hahaha.

Good to hear. Always enjoy reading your work. I mean obviously, this is essentially based of what you've already wrote. I look forward to work coming in the future.

Since this is right after Sasha's debut it would be cool to see Becky trying to avenge Paige, and failing miserably. Or better yet, Emma. I totally ship Emma and Paige as a couple based on their NXT work, the Internet comedy shorts they did for fun, and just the fact their friends in real life. Plus I love Emma as a bottom.

It was a bit harsh to call it a plot hole after one chapter, I just wanted to make sure you were aware of it. I very much look forward to seeing the back story on this fic. Out of curiosity, will the prequel be a separate fic or a chapter of this?

You have my permission to copy as much of my work as you want. As long as you don't, you know, literally copy.

I'm not a very fast writer, and have limited free time. So my goal is to post a wrestling fic a month along with at least one more non-wrestling fic.

No MTL anything to improve my writing is fine. 

On the plot hole, well thats information for the prequels, although I will likely make a point to state that what Sasha is doing now is particularly excessive; this is rather new treatment of tap out bitches. But there is going to be history, that hole will be filled.

This is on a canon timeline btw. This is right after Sasha's debut, yes. NXT tap outs may count, I'll see on that.

The photo's will return don't worry on that.

I would make statements of being unable to sit down, but I don't want to completely copy your work. I'll put my own spin on it, but yeah.

That's a good plan on Naomi and Charlotte, and I think I'll use that. But I have my own way of doing it, after a bit of thinking, and some of the stuff you suggested before, I got some inspiration.

Paige's mum will have a pretty big role in the story. That's all I'll say.

Anyway you'll get an update soon hopefully. I got this out in a nights work so it's isn't too hard to get something out. You'll see the next chapter this week. While we are talking shop, may I be cheeky to ask when we may see some WWE updates from you?

LOL, I meant: She could not tap though. She would not give up!

I hate to be 'that guy' but re-reading the story today I noticed a few spelling errors. I have a mild case of dyslexia, so I hate it when people complain about this in my work, especially when it's normally minor stuff so I'm doing this separately so you can delete this bit if you want. Anyway, I can still find mistakes in my own work after proofreading it for the third time, and most of the mistakes here were barely noticeable, but one stood out, that one being in the paragraph below that is right at the beginning. I mean, surely it should be:

She could not tap though. She would give up!

Paige’s eyes bulged in pain, a moan of agony is all she could muster in the excruciating hold. She furious with herself, how could she make such a stupid mistake! Now she found herself helpless in the middle of the ring, her head painfully pulled backwards, as Sasha taunted her mercilessly to tap. She could not tap though. She could give up! She stretched her arm out, reaching for anything, but she was way too far from the ropes for redemption. Sasha was never going to let up, and why should she? She had all the leverage, all the advantages. Paige could not power out, couldn’t roll out of it. The pain was too much. There was nothing left to do. She frantically tapped out.

BTW, other places you can post this story are archiveofourown, wowefa, and literotica. I particularly get a consistent feedback from literotica, so I especially recommend there. Although they do have a lot of rules about what can and can't be posted.

I hate to be 'that guy' but re-reading the story today I thought of a very obvious plot hole, that being if this is an established rule, then there almost has to be some history given the likes of AJ Lee, Paige and yes Sasha Banks all having established submission moves. Also if you want this to be as close to 'Canon' as possible (like I do with my stories) this should probably be set just after Sasha debuted on the main roster. You can then argue tap outs don't count in NXT, because the women are learning (at least theoretically). Or simply mention how Sasha and the others have all been butt banged before without breaking. Or just ignore the plot hole, as I'm sure most wouldn't care and I could easily ignore it for more of this goodness.

Anyway, I'm glad my work inspired this. Hope you do more very soon. Any idea when? I write multiple stories at once, so it takes me a long time to finish anything. How longed did this take you?

I loved the other women talking to each other about Paige's humiliation when she wasn't even there and hope you include more of that. Ideally with both conquered and unconquered divas.

Also the idea of the Boss Bitch butt-plug was brilliant. I have another idea I was possibly going to use, and I don't know if you could use it as well as the butt-plug, but feel free to use it if you like it. See, during contract signings Sasha doesn't sign her name, she carries around a stamp. It would be hot if she stamped something like Boss Bitch or Property of the Boss on one of her bitches' ass cheeks, and then maybe had a tattoo artist make it permanent.

The photo session at the end might have been my favourite part, but as well as a photo album how about Sasha makes a few copies and sends one of her bitches to stick them up all over the women's locker room? Imagine Sasha's next opponent walking into change into wrestling gear to find a pic of Paige's gaping or plug filled ass hole with the words your next in Sasha's handwriting next to or on the pic.

It's not for everyone, but I'd love to read how Paige can't sit down properly, or even take a shit without pain, because Sasha ass fucks her so much. And maybe she actually needs permission to do either of those things, because Paige's arse is now primarily for fucking and anything else is misusing it. And after a while Paige could even think like that. I don't know, I try not to go into too much detail about that stuff cause it's not for everyone, but I just really like things like that which would enhance the humiliation.

I'd also love to see some ass licking. Sasha has an amazing ass, and she could easily smother her bitches with it and make them kiss and lick it as a sign of submission. Or she could make Paige, or whoever, prepare her latest bitch's butt hole for fucking.

As I mentioned 'Canon' earlier, I think it would be really hot if say Naomi or Charlotte begged for mercy, or tried to join Sasha in her quest to top the division, because they were friends, only for Sasha to make it clear to them that there's only room for one Boss at the top, and that's going to be her. And everybody else, including her friends, were always just pieces of ass waiting to be conquered to her.

Finally on the subject of Paige's Mum, it would be hot if Paige was forced to out herself as a bottom, only for her Mum to reveal the same thing. She could even be Sasha's bitch. Which you might already be doing, but just thought I'd throw it out there.

Thank you so much for all those kind words MTL. This means a lot because in case you couldn't tell, your stories are an inspiration for my work; the whole aspect of domination and humiliation. It's really fantastic to obviously see you so emphusiastic about my work is really an honor.

I have a bit of an idea where I am going, and I've actually already got a plan for some of the stuff you've mentioned already. Conquered girls will turn up in future chapters connected to Sasha, as well as info inbetween weeks. I can confirm that.

I also do intend to have someone not broken by an ass fucking, that will be the core rivalry of the story; that girl and Sasha.

I had no plans on history or indies, but now that I saw some suggestions, I may incorperate it. That may also warrent a spin off/prequel. This does vaguely follow a timeline of actual events, so some stuff may be interesting to include. I especially like the Paige and her Mum stuff, although I have a slightly different tangent from what you said in mind. I do like your idea of presenting herself over skype, and may have to use that, but there's another, more crucial part I'd like to include, connecting in that relationship and history.

Thank you so much for the suggestions, to have what I feel to be the best wrestling fan-fic writer praise my work is great. Give me pointers anytime, I'll gladly accept them.

This is so awesome! Exactly my kind of thing. You did an excellent job at describing the humiliation Paige was going through, and exactly what she was feeling, making the eventual breaking that much more believable. And hotter. I've never wanted something to continue more.

If you do I hope you find a way to incorporate some history into it. Because you've wrote that this isn't a new thing, so when did it first start? Did anyone succeed in breaking anyone else before? I understand that makes the story 100 times more complicated as you tried to keep track, but IMO it also makes the story 100 times more hotter. As an example, if this takes place in 2016, what happened to AJ Lee? Did she straight up retire, or was she broken by one of the Total Divas she hated so much? What about her real-life best friend Kaitlyn? Or even Trish and Lita, who are always coming back to do pre-shows etc? If someone has a completely broken bitch, and they tap, are they allowed to give up that bitch to save their own ass? A kind of get out of jail free card?

If you think about it this will allow an easy way to include divas from the past and make sure the chapters aren't so repetitive (a problem I've had in my writing). I'd love to see Nikki Bella losing fair and square, but as much as Sasha wants to break her she just can't resist the opportunity to publicly humiliate AJ Lee. Which I know makes your story more complicated than it has to be, but I personally think the trade-off would be worth it.

I'd also love to see you bring Paige back as a completely submissive bitch. Same for Sasha's other victims. They could cheer her on, tell the other divas how they should all just tap for Sasha, and show off their plugged butts and/or gaped ass holes if Sasha has ass fucked them too thoroughly for a plug, or Sasha takes the plug out to show off her handiwork.

Also please, please, please include what happened in between weeks. Just a paragraph or even just a couple of lines mentioning how Sasha spent most of last week making sure her latest bitch was 100% broken, which could be mostly unnecessary but I'd imagine someone like Paige having 'buyers remorse' about submitting. And on the subject of Paige specifically, isn't her Mom a wrestler? Do they have this rule on the Indies? If so, imagine Sasha forcing Paige to Skype with her Mom to tell her she is now a 'Boss Bitch' and pointing her plugged arse at the camera as her final test of submission.

Also you can have a chapter where somebody else like say Becky beats someone and humiliates them but can't break them, and then Sasha does it with ease during the next week and then the same to Becky, maybe because she made a bet that Sasha wouldn't be able to do it.

The summary implies that Sasha will eventually tap, although not necessarily break entirely. If she does I hope it's to someone like Nikki Bella, or maybe even Eva Marie, as I love wrestlers losing and being forced to submit to inferior opponents. It would be especially great if Sasha already beat them but opted for a trade, like AJ Lee or maybe even Brie (so the more dominant sister can avenge her).

Anyway, sorry to bombard you with suggestions. I just found your story very inspiring.

Can't wait for the next one!