The best story I have ever read, I hope it's 2nd part or something similar to that comes again. 

This Story is pure gold... It's sad if you dont feel like writing another chapter about emma, cause i would totally love to read it..

At first i couldn't believe there is a 4th chapter now and even if i didnt enjoy it as much as the second and third one, it was still awesome... I just hoped he would really break her and make her is all time sex slave.. But you are the Boss :D 

Maby you'll consider to add another chapter to make my dream come true?! :'D

To be honest this is one of the best stories i've ever seen, so thx for this masterpiece..

(just created this Account to tell you this) 

Chap4.  It makes no sense that after truly breaking her he would let her go.  He can just own her now, enjoying her body and money.  That would have made more sense given what happened before the ending.  Well, hope you write more.  Angelina J, or Brie Larson would be fun.  Or Maise Williams for someone younger.

I actually enjoyed this Fic but I do wonder if you ever plan to finish it. It looks like it hasn't been updated for so long then I can only assume that you quit this story. I am sad about that but nothing I can do.

Hello ArcherNexus,

I've now read the first two chapters of this story, and overall I find it to be quite enjoyable.

Although I find the material used to blackmail Emma a little implausible, (i.e. I think it would take something far worse than that to put her into such a desperate state that she would give into Sean's demands), I don't find it so far out of bounds as to deny my ability to suspend disblief that this was happening.

By far my favorite element of the story is hearing Emma's internal thoughts as she is put through the ringer by a man she finds disgusting. Your actual description of the acts she's performing, (i.e. the blowjobs or the sex), could maybe be a little more robust, but hearing Emma's internal monologue is more than hot enough to make up for it.

I'm very curious to see where you push her to from here, what your protagonist gets her to do and how much resistance she puts up. I'm also curiuos to see if he pushes her too far and maybe she just ends up calling the cops, (probably what she should have done from the begginning...)

Anyway, the story is very enjoyable! Good Job and keep em coming!

Brutal and interesting. Keep it up.

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Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very hot blowjob and wonder what else Sean has planned for Emma.

Looking forward to Emma learning to swallow. And getting pregnant.

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