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Reviews for Waiting in the shadows

By : MolkosWhore
  • From ANON - L_C on July 30, 2006
    Great Fic so far :D Look forward to more chapters
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  • From ANON - Foraoo on October 12, 2003
    Really liking the atmosphere and angst, poor Darren in that last chapter. My heart was aching for him.

    I think there's maybe a bit of Linda G's beta advise accidentlky left in though. In this paragraph:

    "He put his bag on one of the sinks, and searched for his black mascara. It didn't take five minutes. When Darren's make up was perfect again, he put his things in his bag again, always aware that none of the other guys, which could come in, saw something of that. (I'm not sure what you are trying to say here. Always sure that none of the other guys who could come in saw something of that. I'm sorry, what do you mean?)"

    Looking forward to next chapter.

    Foraoo x


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  • From ANON - Mike on October 04, 2003
    wow this is powerful stuff
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  • From ANON - dazzy on October 03, 2003
    of, wow, that was good! Please, go on , can't wait to read next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Tana on October 02, 2003
    Good chapter I can't wait to read more, keep it up.
    Tana
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