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Reviews for You Can't Control Destiny (Completed)

By : pensfan100
  • From ANON - malissa on December 27, 2005
    I love this story!! I think i''ve read it about 20 to 25 times or so. I'm waiting for the sequal of this story, the 7th chatper i mean. And The war ( the begining) for chatper 14. Veyr good writing and i so love thesetwo together even though they dont want to be or whatever in their mind.
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  • From Timebound on November 28, 2005
    Holy SHIT. Now THIS is good writing. Hell, this is EXCELLENT writing. *is jealous* Wow, I'm not one for actor fics, but damn girl, you can WRITE. :) Now I'm totally a Natalie/Hayden shipper. :) And I blame YOU.

    *runs off to read the sequel*
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  • From ANON - darkstorm888 on November 18, 2005
    amazing, i loved it... even tho i started reading the sequel first it was so good that i simply had to check out the first story which i enjoyed just as much! so hurry an finish the sequel dammit!!! lol good job
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  • From ANON - Crazy For Star Wars on August 22, 2005
    Wow! This story was great. Just great!!!!
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  • From ANON - trish on August 04, 2005
    i absolutely LOVED this fan fic. one of the best i've ever read. thank you for sharing it.
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  • From ANON - christine on June 30, 2005
    i love this story so SO much!! great JOB! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - eridani on June 17, 2005
    I wouldn't normally go for the real person fics, but I admit, this one caught my curiosity. Obviously your summary did its job. So, well written! There were some fantatsic moments in the language of this fic, and some great one liners too. I killed myself laughing with the 'the salad's already dead' one...
    Very sweet, and very touching... and, to my surprise, despite the fact that i am quite un-Christian, the religious themes and occassional mention of 'destiny' didn't bother me at all. Normally, that kind of talk makes me squirm, but you did it very elegantly. Some positively delicious scenes there- you certainly know how to draw out tension.
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  • From ANON - Laurel on June 16, 2005
    Why am I in the RP section reading stories? It started with my favorite actor and it's just spiraling. Your's was the second story I clicked on after I clicked on the genre on a whim. I only got past the first couple of sentences of the first story I clicked on.
    Where yours...yours made me stay up past my bedtime to finish reading it. It gave me gooshy feelings and happy squeels. It was so beautiful. And perfect. And...right.
    You're an incredible writer and can spin a tale than people can't put down.
    I can't wait to read the sequel to this tomorrow (A sequal! Yea!).

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  • From ANON - Cindy on June 06, 2005
    Bonnie,

    I recently joined AAEF's group over at Yahoo and have been enjoying reading the work there, especially yours and Kelly's. I was a little hesitant to step into the realm of reading actor fic, but my curiousity was spiked so I printed 3 of your stories out and read them over the weekend.

    I was absolutely blown away.

    I was so taken by this story in particular that I read it TWICE. And that is not something I do very often. Once this story swept me into world of actor fic, especially these two actors, I was hooked. I love your writing style and how well you seem to bring to life your "characters". I must confess, that a touch a guilt swept over me at first for indulging in such a naughty pleasure as this - but the sheer quality of the work helped me quickly get over that.

    I am now a huge fan and will scamper off to read more of your work. I saw over at AAEF that you said to someone that you had written 5 or 6 chapters in a story called "You STILL Can't Control Destiny", which is a sequel to this one I persume. If so, where on earth can I find it?




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  • From ANON - Nastasya on May 29, 2005
    You sooo need to make a sequel!
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  • From ANON - stag on April 15, 2005
    sigh* happy story... i think i read the latter chapters of this like 3 times. i liked it every time!
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  • From ANON - Caz on December 09, 2004
    I honestly don't know what to say about your writing Pensfan. It's probably got to be just about the best I've ever read - and I've read some! Amazing. Truly amazing. Thanks for giving me the ride of a lifetime :D
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  • From ANON - kei on February 04, 0000
    Is this going to develop into something more? The obsessive behaviour seems to be an epidemic.
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  • From ANON - Haylee on March 11, 2004
    hey...this story is awesome so far, i check all the time for updates!!
    keep up the good work you really have a lot of talent! so addicting
    can't wait to see what happens...peace xXo [ hAyLeE ]
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  • From Pagan on January 17, 2004
    Now this is how an actor fic is supposed to be written. I've read your stuff at another site solrealready know how this ends. Bravo! Excellent story. You made me believe that Nat and Hayden could have fallen in love in real life. Too bad they didn't!! I look forward to more of your work.
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