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  • From ANON - NayaKla on March 22, 2005
    OMG! O.O Nick-Sexual was PRICELESS, TOTALLY CLASSICIAL! Lol, also get Mar to give Nick another pet name^^ Hehe, I this was an "Unexpected" pairing! lol, BUT I LOVE IT! So much humor. HEY, when they have sex, who's going to be on top?! OR BOTH *Falls and drools all over the place* YOU ARE LORD AND MASTER! Plus you inspired me to right a song with this line:My pulse is racing and my hands are shaking.. THANKS ALOT FOR THAT! If you want, you can become one of my offcial muses? PLEASE ^_^ I haven't been inspired in months like that, byes! *Waves*
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  • From ANON - kensi on March 17, 2005
    I know this is the characters speaking, but you probably could do with toning down the overuse of colloquialism. Chapter nine is much better written, than say, chapter two.

    Other than that, I really have to say, this is an excellant story. You get into character and gauge reactions quite well.

    That's all.
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  • From ANON - Aissa on March 16, 2005
    ummm, nothing. I'm just being my stalker self and placing a review here, too. ;)

    so, when's that update coming, line? i'm having withdrawal symptoms here. *g*
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  • From ANON - ice on March 14, 2005
    Mmmm...!!! It was worth it!!!! Thank you!!!
    Do you plan a "happy end"? :)
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  • From ANON - Herald Soucree on March 14, 2005
    God, no! Why isn't there sex?! I understand that you want them to take it slow, but WHAT ABOUT THE SEX?! SEEEEX!!!

    ...

    Anyway, I'm so glad you updated. "And now for something completly different." Ironically, I just watched MP's "The Life of Brian" at my boyfriend's apartment. "Everyone, do as the Messiah and take off one shoe!" "No no no, the shoe is a symbol!" Ah, good times. Yeah, my boyfriend has an obsession with Monty Python and Mystery Science Theatre 3000. He has the box sets to both. And, to add to his oddness, he had more Marilyn Manson stuff than anyone could think possible. He has, litterally, 120 Manson CDs, including imported ones from Japan with bonus tracks and crap. And every square inch of his room is covered in pictures of Manson. That's hundreds. I love him anyway, though. But the point of this rant is this: Either Nick of Marshall should have some weird obsession that doesn't fit with their personality. Something you wouldn't expect, like a voodoo shrine in a closet.

    ...Yeah, I havn't had sex in a few days (period, godammit!), and I'm kinda in a weird PMS horomone driven funk. Please forgive me.
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  • From ANON - lesley on March 12, 2005
    an update!!! woohoo! dance of joy! finally. i've been talking to myself for weeks wondering what'll happen. i almost got committed to some asylum. lol! aight, not really. but close. *g*

    lovey lots this chapter as usual. marshall's one confused cutie, still a sweetie tho (interlaced hands! i almost died!) and nick's all panicky again and i love it. the 8 mile interchange left me with a smile for minutes. maybe even HOURS. almost had a lockjaw there. hee!

    update soon, okay?

    and btw, i been a fan of em's since 99, i was reading through your comments and i would just want you to know that your em aint ooc at all. i think you got him almost perfect. your em's the em you read/watch on his interviews and hear on his personal songs. believe me, i know an ooc em when i see one and yours is certainly not one of them. you read that story 'sweet fucking ass'? now that's an ooc. it's still hot though. ;)

    anyway, good job line. i repeat: update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Herald Soucree on March 01, 2005
    Nick-sexual. Wow. Okay, that works. Heh, the butterfly line had me thinking about a RPS fic I'm doing for Marilyn Manson, of all people. It's about a rookie cop named David who gets stuck working as security for a Manson concert, and after the concert ends up walking in on Marilyn masturbating. Oh corse, this leads to much guy lovin', but the first line of the fic happens to be, "David McGregor felt like carnivorous butterflies had taken up residence in his stomach." If you like, you can borrow the carnivorous butterfly line too, since you liked my fake phone conversation from earlier so much. :) Anyway, update soon, 'cause I was really hoping for guy sex in the last chapter. *sniff*
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  • From ANON - ice on February 10, 2005
    ... und jetzt muss ich schon wieder warten aufs naechsten Chapter...,
    aber es lohnt sich!!! Ist es sehr schwer Marshal nicht zu sehr OOC zu machen?
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  • From ANON - Aviona on February 07, 2005
    Sorry, I'm late. I'm so happy to see an update of 2 chapters, I'm in-love with this story. I agree with everyone's reviews, that 'Nick-sexual' quip got me, too. Marshall's so sweet no wonder Nick's in-love. I can't wait to see how they'll be spending their 1st weekend together.

    Hope there'll be another update soon.
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  • From ANON - cole on February 04, 2005
    i love this story. 2 very pretty blonds hooking up. definitely gets me hot and bothered. lmao! pls update soon.
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  • From ANON - lesley on February 02, 2005
    yay! 2 chappies! all is happy in emslash world again.

    i love their conversation. nick is all fidgety and being honest like he's drunk (i dunno, i'm like that when i'm drunk. thoughts that's supposed to be just in my head slip out. dang!). and marshall? he really knows how to swept a man off his feet, don't he? hooray for nick-sexuals! they so cute i wanna kill them. ::lol::

    i'm dying in anticipation for part II.
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  • From ANON - Tetra on February 01, 2005
    That was quick! Thank you so much for the speedy update. You delivered, as promised, and it's good. Damn, it's good. So, when's part 2 coming? *g*

    This new chapter is so charming. I'm squeeing like I'm 12. Nick and Marsh are so cuddly and adorable. I love how they have this doubts in their head, fighting with themselves and would just go with what their impulse leads them to. It's great.

    Nick-sexual! If somebody would tell me something anywhere near those words, I'd be their slave for life. ;)

    As for Marshall's promise on the previous chapter, did he bring along a suit with him? I so agree with Nick on that one. Em would look good in a suit. (and in drag *g*)
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  • From ANON - Funny! Aissa :) on January 31, 2005
    Wooo! Quickie update!!! *dances like a chicken*

    I have this big silly smile the whole time I was reading this. He's staying over at Nick's! Oh God, I'm so worried that Marshie'll be a bitch and stay at a hotel because *in a whiny voice* 'I'm not ready to take the next step yet'.

    They're so adorable having this argument with themselves. The silly, nervous descriptions. I love it!

    "My butterflies have butterflies"

    So cute!

    and, and...

    "He’s quiet. He’s very quiet and it’s very disconcerting. Mommy? I’m scared!"

    ROTFLMAO!!!

    As for this one,

    "I’m not gay, I’m not bi, I am however fucking turned on by you. I think I’m Nick-sexual."

    and this?

    "And I’m not just in it for the sex."

    *dies* I'm in love!!!

    More please! and soon! *wuvs you*

    BTW, please tell Nick to change Marshie's mind about the assfucking thing? Smack Marshall upside the head and make him realize that he's such a nelly bottom. *g*
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  • From ANON - Nishia on January 31, 2005
    Wooo Hooo. I can hardly wait for "The weekend" now. The anticipation is going to kill me.
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  • From ANON - Aissa on January 30, 2005
    *lol* Tetra! Y'know, I feel like joining Nick with the jumping on the bed thingie, too. OMG, I'm imagining Nick jumping on his bed when all of a sudden 2 complete strangers jumps along with him. *lol*

    Line, OMG, an update! sooo happy. Nick is so funny. I love your Nick to pieces. I want to pet him and tell him that it's gonna be alright. Marshie will understand the slip-ups, he's loving it, you see. He's as nervous as you are.

    Yay! Love him!!! and Marshall's flying over! I think I'm having a hard time understanding myself now. I'm just too happy for words. Thanks for finally updating. I hope the next one will be here soon.

    And yes, Nick, he so does smile. There are lots of pictures to prove. And he has the cutesiest dimples ever. You'll die, I'm sure. Blinded by the prettiness ;)
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