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Reviews for The Brain Is The Greatest Erogenous Zone

By : varenoea
  • From ANON - Salem on January 04, 2007
    Made me giggle like an idiotic fangirl. You rock.
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  • From Siarra on August 12, 2005
    Wow. Usually when there's a good, long fic with the sex in the end, the hot stuff is boring and anticlimactic compared to the good story that led the characters there, but you, my friend, delivered. Your great writing style held through all the way. This is definitely one of my favorite chapters of the story, and not just because of the obvious reasons.
    I hope you will be writing more of these fics in the future.
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  • From ANON - Sagi on August 11, 2005
    Hurrah! Till/Flake is the pairing of all time! besides I really enjoy your writing. All the details and the way you build up the story. I enjoyed the sex scenes very much. I do hope that you will add more chapters to this fic.



    Sagi (aka Ninetta)
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  • From Siarra on August 10, 2005
    Talk about good build up. This chapter is awesome! It doesn't have all that much happening in it, but it's all the more intense. It had some nice dialogue, and I really liked the way you showed their thoughts as well. Some of them were quite fun to read... It's also great to see how the characters have developed, gaining more depth to them, especially Till. I know we all aren't perfect, but there are again some spelling mistakes and I personally hate it when people don't bother to mention about them in my stories, so...
    Once again, I remain waiting for more.
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  • From Siarra on August 09, 2005
    This is getting exciting. The story is taking some new, interesting twists and I can hardly wait for the next chapter... Unfortunately a few misspellings had slipped in, but it certainly didn't hinder the lovely reading experience a single bit. I love the way you portray the chemistry between Till and poor Flake. It's clear that there's friendship there, balancing out the newly discovered awkwardness. This chapter also had a nice touch of humour to it; Flake's adventures with the stitches and the way you described Till's less than graceful drunken state. Okay, drunken people are never fun when they happen to you, but...
    I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From Siarra on August 09, 2005
    Wow. This chapter was great. It seems that you're one of the rare writers who listen to the feedback they get, and I must say that it's certainly paying off. This chapter brings out the way you've improved and it shows. The ambience of the story was wonderful, and your writing style is just lovely while still being every bit as addictive. I certainly hope you on't intend to end the story any time soon because you really have a good thing going on here. Poor, poor Flake... That fantasy was nothing short of tantalizing, let me tell you. You are obviously gifted with the talents of writing hot man-lovin' as well as intriguing stories. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2005
    T.T
    ohhhh please! - Continue this storry!
    Itīs sooooo good - it canīt end now - or?
    please not - let them be todether!
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  • From Siarra on August 08, 2005
    This is certainly a very interesting fic. It has some really good moments and it's only on the second chapter so far. Poor Flake, suffering one embarrassment after another and the things between them... You certainly know how to hook a reader. It seems that the first chapter was slightly more thoroughly thought out than the continuation, and your writing style could use a bit more work, but I definitely like the way you're building up the story.
    We all want to know what happens next, so I hope that you update soon.
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  • From on June 14, 2005
    I love Till/Flake pairings and I must say that for a mild NC-17 fic, this was very good. Mmmmmmmm... what IF Till had noticed Flake's thoughts and acted upon them? =P That would be a great sequel to this fic.

    Besides Flake's thoughts, though, I felt as though a little more description would have helped the fic greatly. For example, if you had described the book as Flake handed it to Till, or if you had described the physical appearances of both Flake and Till, the story would have been much more interesting. I only give it three plus symbols because of this.

    Good fic overall, but needs more detail in some areas.
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