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Reviews for Yokan

By : yukithevampireprince
  • From ANON - Gx-reborn on June 15, 2005
    What an amazing story! I love the writing style you used for it. Very cool.
    Oh thank you for commenting on my story!
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  • From ANON - Lord on June 14, 2005
    First of all, I love having Fu~ki here on AFF..there are just not enaugh BLODD-FFs on here..and MUCC..and Miyavi..
    Hm..but there are so many grammar mistakes it is hard to read sometimes, and maybe you could leave space between the dialogs and the plot..or something..
    It is really hard to read to me.
    So practise a bit, will you?
    ..^-^..your treasure of words is really good I think, it is just your grammar..

    Lord
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  • From ANON - Kaichan on June 13, 2005
    It's a good story basis. There are some grammatical errors and such, but other than that it was pretty good. :> Maybe just proofread your works to make sure the sentence structure flows and makes sense?
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  • From ANON - kami on June 13, 2005
    ah! this was one to really have around! i liked the format of the writing very much.! keep writitng, maybe you could actually make novels someday ^.^
    -kami
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  • From ANON - yami990 on June 13, 2005
    more please.
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  • From ANON - DanSan on June 13, 2005
    Dude... o_O... I like your writing!
    Honestly, it's powerful!
    Are you going to continue this?! Please, continue!!!
    This is really, really GREAT... yeah, with capitals and all ^__^.
    Keep!
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