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Reviews for Jealous

By : yukithevampireprince
  • From ANON - yami990 on August 04, 2005
    yet again even more interesting. this is so addictive. here's cookies pocky and opudding to bribe you to continue.
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  • From ANON - yami990 on August 03, 2005
    oh kisaki just has to be a bitch and get all of deg pissed off. please continue. here's cookies pocky and pudding to help you write more.
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  • From ANON - yami990 on August 02, 2005
    please continue . this story just keeps getting more addictive with each chapter. here's a platre of cookie to help you write faster.
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  • From ANON - yami990 on July 29, 2005
    oh miyus having puppies. hehe if funny that you have everyone passing out. more please. here's some hot cocoa to help you write more.
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  • From ANON - Kaichan on July 29, 2005
    uhm... it needs alot of work still. nothing youve written has really improved much. try harder, maybe? anyway, good luck. but you really need a lot of work at writing. im sure eventually you'll get better.
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  • From ANON - Zeraphine on July 24, 2005
    please, please get a beta! some sentences were just really difficult to decipher...
    also, for ym taste, the story seams a bit rushed. maybe you should get a bit more into details and describtion, but that is only for my taste.
    yours, Zera ^-^
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  • From ANON - Ruka on June 28, 2005
    *Glomps* I
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  • From ANON - DanSan on June 28, 2005
    o_O This was short...
    ...
    ...
    But it was good anyway ^___^ 'cause I liked it a lot 'cause it has Kyo and Shinya acting like a pair of twats :P
    I want to read more... and... keep please! Thank you!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Kaichan on June 27, 2005
    Your grammar needs alot of work. If you split up some sentences, and changes some words around, I could actually tell what you're trying to say. You could use a beta, it would help alot and make your stories sound alot better. :3 It was a fair attempt tho.
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  • From ANON - Lord on June 27, 2005
    Please, ask someone to beta your FFs..there are so many twisted letters in there.
    It was okay in thge first chapter, but the second was kinda short and full of mistakes.
    I like the story, but I just cannot read it..
    Maybe some things like . , : ; - or something might help..the sentences arent structured at all, and sometimes you just start a phrase inside another.
    You are confusing me..lol..
    By the way, I like your name..yuuuuki !!!
    ..^-^..

    Lord
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  • From ANON - yami990 on June 26, 2005
    more please.
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  • From ANON - Kyo on June 24, 2005
    This fic is good so far, but it was a bit difficult to read since the sentences were structured sort of weird =/
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  • From ANON - DanSan on June 23, 2005
    Oh dude, so many pictures of Kyo in my head I believe I'm getting nuts... oh... wait... I believe I am nuts already o_O... yeah... or maybe not... who knows? Who cares? I think I like this story... hhmmm... specially if Kyo is uke... I would prefer if it was KaoruxKyo, buuuuut... Kyo uke is acceptable with anyone :P:P yeah, a perv I am pretty sure I am XD.
    By the way, I really liked the expression you used "Kyo slept on like there was no tomorrow!" 'cause it's an expression I use a lot (in portuguese, of course).
    I wanna read more.
    Keep!
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