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Reviews for A diamond in the sea of lust

By : angelorton
  • From ANON - Mercika on July 13, 2005
    I'm going to be honest ... it sounds interesting, but my mind is distracted by the bad grammar/writing. Capitals are GOOD. Bad grammar is BAD. Theres a quick lesson for you. I don't mean to sound harsh ... but maybe a BETAer might help?
    Sorry if I sounded mean.
    ~ Mercika
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  • From ANON - M on July 11, 2005
    Capitalize properly. Try to prevent it from reading like a bad - if slightly hot - porn flic, unless that's what you're going for. Diamonds, these words...
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  • From ANON - mrs cena on July 10, 2005
    i cant wait till tha next ch
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  • From ANON - Fidelitas on July 01, 2005
    interesting story...I can't wait for readin more about it!
    She accepted the offer...I think she doesn't know yet what she is getting herself into ;)

    Update soon,please :)
    Randy & Dave and a woman together....WOW!
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  • From ANON - caitie on June 29, 2005
    love it can't wait to read more
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