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Reviews for Boy

By : Erzulie
  • From Devyant on January 06, 2009
    That was HOT ! °*°
    Need a very cold shower now...
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  • From ANON - E on July 10, 2006
    You write really good! Wanna read more!
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  • From on July 03, 2006
    Hm, I've read this fic before and I like it. ^.^ I'd die to read a Kyo/Kaoru master/slave fic where Kyo is dom though. He's always sub with Kaoru in these kinds of fics >_>
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  • From ANON - KyoisHOT on September 26, 2005
    OOhh, please please! Let there be a second to were Kyo sings for the neighborhood!!! Beside that it was hoootttt!!!!I love it!!!!!!!
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  • From Siarra on July 09, 2005
    Now this is one hot fic. I just loved the dirty word play they had going on. The amount of description you managed to insert was just great. You had the characters down great. A powerful, wicked Master and his submissive but not quite Boy... Delicious. It's very difficult to get that strong-and-silent type dom done so well with him having such a presence but you pulled it off magnificently.
    Just one little detail I'd like to point out, though. And that would be Kaoru finishing his lines with "ne". Not that many fic writers know about the difference between "ne" and "na", and that is that the other is feminine and the other masculine. While it's okay for both to be used, I seriously doubt that an assertive dom like that would be using the feminine version.
    I hope you don't mind me ranting about that, it's just something that caught my eye and as far as I'm concerned, it's the only blemish on this great fic.
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  • From ANON - DanSan on July 02, 2005
    Hhmm... I read this somewhere before at LiveJournal...and it's very good indeed! ^__^
    Are you still thinking about turning this into a series of one shots?
    At least I was waiting to "hear" Kyo sing the next night :P
    I don't know if you will, but still... KEEP!!!
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  • From ANON - yami990 on July 01, 2005
    very good.
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  • From ANON - Gx-reborn on July 01, 2005
    I read this on livejournal! Its a really great story! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Sakuchan on July 01, 2005
    You always write fantastic ff!! ^__^
    I liked this one very much,since I like tha pairing and Kyo being uke U_Uv
    The way you write is soooo good ^////^
    Good job!
    P.S. Kaoru is a perfect master ne? ^o^
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