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Reviews for Free Fall

By : redqueeninwonderland
  • From ANON - Noel on August 14, 2005
    That was seriously the hottest story I've ever read in my life. I was so into it..A little too into it I think. Excellent job. Great writing and the detail was awesome.
    Now I need to find my bf to take care of a little problem.. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Fallon on August 10, 2005
    Excellent. I don't know how else to describe it.
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  • From ANON - Harper on August 09, 2005
    This quite possibly may have been the best and most erotic fiction I have EVER read. I felt as though I was there, inside Scarlett's head. The images you painted, and the tension you built-- was incredible. However, your dialogue between Billie and Scarlett--as well as her inner monologue-- was what really made it exceptional. I had goosebumps and my heart was pounding by the end. You know a story is good when it affects you like that. Thank you for posting it, and giving all of us the opportunity to read it. Hopefully you enjoyed writing it as much as I've enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - StTunny on July 26, 2005
    Oh, a good Green Day PWP.
    I didn't know those existed, but my faith in humanity is restored.
    Very amusing, you write PWP really well...
    And the fruitcake/Jack daniels comment had me giggling insanely.
    I also really liked the way you talked about Billies' voice.
    *snerk* I really relate to it.
    OMG WRIT MOR!
    Actually, just keep writing fanfiction.
    You're very good.
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  • From ANON - ThisIsGreenDay on July 05, 2005
    Ha, that was fucking awesome. What made it was the line at the end: "Don't you remember the dismount?" Mwahahahaha.
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  • From ANON - Deefor on July 04, 2005
    That...was amazing. You write about making love exceptionally well, without losing sight of who the characters are, what they look like, or how they would behave. I hope you'll submit more to this site!
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 04, 2005
    Wow that was really hot!! Excellent!
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