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Reviews for Ms Self Destruct

By : TrentReznorsSin
  • From ANON - Danu on August 09, 2005
    ::claps and cheers::

    I loved this chapter, especially the tension between Erin and Trent as they were dancing. Plus I thought it was really cute how Erin singing along during a bit of their dance, being that that is something that I've done myself.
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  • From ANON - Monica on August 08, 2005
    Aww they were so close. That was very sweet of Trent to protect her like that. I'm really enjoying reading this story, its awesome. Thanks for mentioning me to! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Miss Mental Health on August 06, 2005
    Loving it! The very slow buildup is perfectly paced considering the inevitability it's leading to - no need to rush into things here. The short, vignette-style chapters are a nice contrast to the wide scope of the story. I also like the way you explore the characters' thoughts, making it clear that Trent and Erin are meant to be while giving us a good taste of the perceptions and insecurities that might keep them apart. I'd like to see an aborted attempt or two at these two getting together before they finally give in; I'd also like to see a little bit more from each character's point of view before they come clean with each other (but that's just me, don't take my word for anything). Finally, well done in keeping the setup from seeming too forced, difficult given your ambitious plot line! Please keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Monica on August 03, 2005
    Awesome! Three chapters, I really love it, Erin and Trent would make such a cute couple. I hope you post more soon!
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  • From Dayna on July 29, 2005
    Aw, I was mentioned in the A/N. Anywho, once again thought this was a good chapter. Can't wait till the next :o)
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  • From ANON - Monica on July 28, 2005
    Great update! I really like where this is going, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Monica on July 25, 2005
    Wow, I really like this story and its very good writing too. Please post more real soon!
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  • From ANON - Danu on July 24, 2005
    please keep going!
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  • From ANON - Danu on July 22, 2005
    would love to read more, please update soon :o)
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