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Reviews for About a dream

By : SweetEire
  • From ANON - Fanny on August 16, 2005
    Hi Laura,
    wow 2 ff at once. And both are very good.
    I like your plot and I like your characters.
    Continue, please.
    Hug Fanny
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  • From ANON - jw on August 12, 2005
    I love it! But there are a few mistakes you need to be careful of.

    1. Verb tense, you switch from First Person I to Third Person He/she/we/ and they
    2. Also make sure to correctly seperate the paragraphs and dialogue appropreately.

    You might want to get a beta reader to check for errors.

    Otherwise, I loved the plot, and I think you have a good story. But once you take care of the errors, it'll be even better.


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  • From ANON - Jessica on August 11, 2005
    Wow, this was very good. I am glad I inspired you to write this and you are also a very talented writer. I hope the next one comes out soon, because I want to read what happens. Great Job

    Jessica
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