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By : redqueeninwonderland
  • From SlackerBitch on July 18, 2007
    Best story ever (besides the babysitter that is). Anyways, it's so accurate, it just sounds so incharacter, exactly how they would react in the given situation. You're so skilled it's not even mentally stable anymore. It makes me sad it's over. .. . .
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2006
    I'm reading it!
    This is every bit as good as The Babysitter, and people should recognise that.
    So yes, I've been scouring this site, along with a couple others, making my way through the rancid shit to get to the good stuff.
    You and Drusilla (Drucilla? I've forgotten) have made it all worth it.
    Your sex scenes are the hottest fucking things I've ever read. Pure panty melters.
    I can't stress enough how much I love the fact that you have a good grasp on spelling and grammar.
    I love your style of writing, there's such a stark contrast to the way you portrayed Billie in The Babysitter to how you've shaped him out in this one, and yet they're both so realistic.
    You also have a good grasp on your characters. Not fucked up enough to the point where it's got a reverse Mary Sue vibe, and not perfect either.
    But shades of grey. Just like life.
    I thank you, and hope you keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 13, 2006
    I know it's been awhile but you have to update this story, it's one of my favorites :)
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  • From ANON - Rodger on July 06, 2006
    Jesus woman I want your talent!! I love all your stories, but this one I do have a soft spot for, I hope you wont leave it at this! Thank you for keeping me sane with your writing x)
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  • From ANON - B on February 14, 2006
    Wow, I really like this story. I had read the one before this, but this one adds so much more to the it. What is Legs' real name, and what is going to happen between her Tre and Billie? I truly enjoy this story and now I'm off to go read The Babysitter. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - shae on January 16, 2006
    keeeeep....gooo-iiingg....
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  • From ANON - Selenem on January 09, 2006
    Awesome. Totally awesome. More more more!
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  • From LadyNightshade on January 03, 2006
    Oh dear... I fear I've become rather addicted to your writing it seems. *beam*

    I just... can't get over your characterizations. The just blow my mind. As wonderful and sweet and -believable- Billie was in babysitter, he's equally as believable as this fucked up user who doesn't realize how badly he's messing with the girl's head. Oddly enough a lyric occurs to me.

    I heard it all before
    So don't knock down my door
    I'm a loser and a user so I don't need no accuser
    to try and slag me down because I know you're right
    So go do what you like
    Make sure you do it wise
    You may find out that your selfdoubt means nothing
    was ever there

    You can't go forcing something if it's just
    Just not right

    No time to search the world around
    Cause you know where I'll be found
    When I come around
    When I come around

    Wonderful, really. Absolutely fucking wonderful!
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  • From ANON - adrienne on December 26, 2005
    you should update this storie it was amzing oh. yeah. and you should recheck your spelling also!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kris on December 12, 2005
    This story is fantastic. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - yo on December 06, 2005
    good story, but what is her name? I'm curious please update.
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  • From ANON - Gah. on November 27, 2005
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  • From ANON - tas on November 27, 2005
    You totally had me hooked with this story. It's the best Green Day Fan Fiction I have read so far....you gotta do some more with this..my brain was leaking out of my nose and that is a compliment!
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  • From ANON - kris on November 22, 2005
    I love this story. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - warding_off_regrets on October 08, 2005
    Ah! Suspense!

    Another excellent story from you. :) I'll be looking forward to the next update!
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