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Reviews for Slip of a Boy

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  • From ANON - ipsemes on October 20, 2005
    no fluf overload..PERFECT! and I willl b sure to check out you and your friends new slash website.........(hard) LOVE YOU!
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  • From ANON - Druscilla Ryan on October 18, 2005
    Oh, perfect. It was perfect. It was a great ending. Sweet, but not perfect. I mean, it WAS perfect as in the fact that it wasn't perfect. You don't understand a single fucking thing I'm saying. It was great and I loved the humor at the end and I'm just picturing that cute little scene now and I'm glad it worked out with Tre. And I love that whole line about sustaining, even though my favorite thing was when they were talking about dumping Billie Joe in the shower. Don't know why. Don't ask. It just stuck with me. So, there's my hopeless ramble. Hope you actually get something from it. Can't wait for another story!!!
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  • From ANON - Rebel_whatsername on October 18, 2005
    Nice ending . . .fluff is GREAT! Great work!
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  • From ANON - Lore_Lowell on October 10, 2005
    No, that sex scene was great. I, personally, loved it. Is there more to this story? I really hope so; it's wonderful.
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  • From ANON - ipsemes on October 09, 2005
    deliciously fluffy!
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  • From ANON - Rebel_whatsername on October 09, 2005
    Bad sex scene writer? Are you MAD, that was so great! I loved the fluff tossed in too, you're a great writer!
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  • From druscillaryan on October 09, 2005
    Huge fucking smiles. I FUCKING LOVED THAT! It wasn't sex entered just to enter sex, which was perfect. I loved the prelude, with the 'did you feel that'. Oh, God. Wow. And the sex was . . . fucking hot. And I know it sounds really weird to say it, but my favorite part was actually those first kisses and when Mike says he wants Billie Joe to scream. Am I a freak for saying that? I just loved how emotionally charged those few lines were.

    I love you!
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  • From ANON - Emily on October 09, 2005
    Fantastic! Man I love this. Keep it coming pleeeease, it's great.
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  • From ANON - Ipsemes on October 08, 2005
    So wonderful. billie is broken and mike will fix him, just perfect. im so proud of you and all your rave reviews.
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  • From ANON - ipsemes on October 06, 2005
    how evil, leaving off the next scene! i wait with bated breath for your next amazing installment!
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  • From druscillaryan on October 06, 2005
    I'm going to cry. Seriously. That was so sad. I feel so bad for Billie. His kids, his wife. Mike . . . oh, Mike. He better fix Billie or I'm just going to scream and commit suicide. Don't apologize for this chapter it was great. It was awesome. You write great angst. I don't know what you're complaining about. It's the perfect amount of depression and resolve. Can't wait for another update!
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  • From ANON - Emily on October 06, 2005
    Loving it, loving it! Please write more soonies! xxx
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  • From ANON - Druscilla Ryan on October 04, 2005
    More! I love this. I love the build up. The 'masturbation' scene was the weirdest thing . . . I loved how that conveyed love and how you managed to put it into words. It was one of the most emotional/erotic things I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - Emily on October 03, 2005
    Wow, this is great, it is really is! I'm totally hooked, I love your style of writing, and Billie Joe...all I can say is 'awwww', even though it's fictional. Please write more soon, I'm begging you!

    Love Emily xxx
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  • From ANON - dunlop-1 on October 01, 2005
    Update soon...like, now! lol
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