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Reviews for Manifestation of My Emotional State

By : druscillaryan
  • From ANON - tre_cool_is_my_homeboy129 on October 23, 2005
    awesome!!!! yes..the ending did leave us hanging a bit but damn was the rest good
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  • From ANON - SmoothieQueen on October 18, 2005
    I can't say much. This is a really good story. I love it. I don't know if you intend on adding more, but if you do...I would definitly read them!
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  • From ANON - Lore_Lowell on October 15, 2005
    I liked the ending too. Mysterious endings are sometimes good and they can fit when they're needed to. And don't let the other person get you down. You write wonderfully and do it to let things off your chest. No one has a right to critisize it. Well, lovely writing! You probably have to be my favorite author! :D
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  • From ANON - Rayne on October 15, 2005
    I want to say something profound and whatnot, but...anyway. Your story (uh, scene? since the plot didn't really develop--it wasn't really supposed to, I guess) was great, and I absolutely loved the poetry. I can tell you have a good grasp of the English language, and I very much appreciate that. I read your author's note and I won't tell you all the typical shit about "you ought to stop; you could really hurt yourself," because I'd be willing to bet my ass that you already know. And me saying something about it isn't going to make anything change...well, if you're anything like me, I suppose. I kinda understand where you're coming from though (not going to say completely because I don't know your situation well enough), because while I'm not really a full-fledged cutter, I've done it several times before. Life sucks sometimes, yeah. I just try to ignore it and fake it for everyone else's sake. *unenthusiastic laugh* Anyway, if you ever feel like you need someone to talk to who doesn't know you, I left my email. You don't have to if you don't want, lol, since I doubt I would either. *smile*
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  • From ANON - Rebel_whatsername on October 15, 2005
    Personally, I think that this was amazing and beautiful. The ending was perfect, there are few ways to end a story like this, so it all worked out perfectly. I myself have finally just stopped cutting after two years, so I know exactly how it all feels. All I can say is that I hope you feel much better soon and that you don't fall into a self-destructive pattern.
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