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Reviews for What you don't know epilogue:Whichever comes first

By : chibikitten
  • From ANON - Takerslady on December 19, 2005
    This is a great story, I would've posted sooner but I was to busy trying to finish it. Just incase I forget again you're a great writer, and I LOOVVVEE!!! your story. I think I'll like all the ones you write. Hasta Luego!
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  • From ANON - JacktheSinister_JaketheJust on December 17, 2005
    This chapter is awesome. I've been waiting for a while for it. The only compliant I have and it's not really a complaint as it is a opinion really. I though Kane was kinda creepy about the whole hair dresser thing, though the Jeff thing was cool. Other than that keep up the fantastico work and I'll keep reading. No lemon;.; I guess your right and it didn't fit. Too bad I was wondering what your brillient mind could come up with.
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  • From ANON - bluebird2073318 on December 16, 2005
    I think you are right about not sticking in a sex scene. I think its too early for that. You should let the charactors develop a 'ship first, then tackle a sex scene. Your doing a fab job. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - souless_purity on December 16, 2005
    ohh youve got me hooked!! damn girl
    and the spelling and grammer errors are becoming fewer and further between :):):):)
    great story
    excellent pairing;)
    loving the speed with which things are progressing
    you would have COMPLETLY turned me off the whole thing if you had have gone the PWP for this chapter
    *thumbs up*
    :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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  • From ANON - Miss Undertaker on December 15, 2005
    We wanna see them have sex dammit!
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  • From ANON - Miss Undertaker on December 14, 2005
    I love this story! Update immediatly!
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  • From ANON - Anna on November 19, 2005
    Im surprised i actually enjoyed this stroy i mean they r such an uncommon couple but i loved it soo plzz review
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  • From Siarra on November 10, 2005
    This chapter is very nice. It started out with a bit of flair (absolutely no pun intended) but then calmed down to reveal some deep interaction between the characters, making the build up of this story one of the best I've seen in a while. The chemistry between them is simply awesome, and the way you wrote Kane for this chapter was wonderful, adding another interesting turn to the story. He's just the kind of character who is expected to have some deep, dark secrets. I'm not sure how you're planning to get a lemon into the story so early on but I'm very interested to see how you pull it off, and otherwise see the story continued as a whole. Unfortunately you grammar and spelling are still getting more and more colourful, occasionally making your meaning pure guess work.
    By the way, I'm flattered that my reviews make you happy.
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  • From ANON - Given2Fly on November 08, 2005
    Nice job so far, kid! There are a few grammatical errors that are sometimes annoying...."damn" is spelled d-a-m-n. Aside from these, you've got definite talent and I'm really looking forward to what happens next! On a side note: I'd be happy to try and beta for you, if you'd like.
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  • From ANON - JacktheSinister_JaketheJust on November 07, 2005
    First off WOW!! I love it. I never really thought of Kane and Matt as a pairing but the way you make it makes me want to read more. Keep up your writing at least so little poeple like me can read them. Please update as soon as you can and I'll reveiw again. Love the fic.
    JacktheSinister_JaketheJust
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  • From ANON - Manic P on November 07, 2005
    Despite a few grammar and spelling errors I am really enjoying this fic! I really love Matt fics and I haven't read a Matt/Kane in a long time, so this is very refreshing. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - bluebird2073318 on November 07, 2005
    I like this fic. Got alota angst in it but I'm all for it. Good Job. Keep up the good work. Kane Rules!!
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  • From Siarra on October 30, 2005
    Hmm... The plot is really thickening. The way you you write the tension between Matt and Kane is simply fantastic, and it's obvious that there's room for more to build up there. It's true that they appear quite dramatic but it's in good proportions, fitting their characters and the setting perfectly. Your characterization of Edge is dead on for this story, he's really shaping up to be the bad guy we love to loathe. All those lies and the treachery... Completely WWE-scale drama there. The whole story so far is just wonderful and I'll be sure to wait for more.
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  • From Siarra on October 25, 2005
    Wow. This fic certainly is unique. I don't think I've ever seen this pairing done before, but I can really see it working in this storyline. The story seems really great, and your characterizations are awesome. I definitely love the way you're showing Kane's hidden depths, and Matt's awesome, too. All those addicting twists and turns... You sure know how to captivate an audience! The slightly angsty ambience of the story is great and your writing style is very pleasant to read. The only complaint I have is your grammar and spelling. I seriously recommend getting a spell check, and preferably a good proof reader as well.
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