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Reviews for Full Throttle

By : runningnakedinthepark
  • From LycianLecter on September 19, 2009
    Hmm... it's sweet and great and awesome... and way too short XD
    I'd have loved some sweet short lemony scene in the hotel room... but... well I guess that's my pervy side speaking ;)

    Yours
    Raphaela
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  • From ANON - schuldigLiebe on January 13, 2006
    this was so great! i love the relationship between Till and Richard! oh and Flake was so evil, it ws awesome.
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  • From ANON - lola on November 25, 2005
    Though I did enjoy this fic, especially the way you described Richard throughout, I do have some con-crit to offer;
    'his eyes like throwing metallic blue flashlights'
    That makes no sense whatsoever. There are a few sentences like this that just don't fit, and though it's obvious what they're intended to mean they're a bit confusing to say the least, and take away the focus of what's really going on. I'd suggest a proof reader go over it just so you can catch slip-ups like this.
    Otherwise, this is promising! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2005
    Awesome!!!! Please write a sequel!!!!!
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