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Reviews for Warmth on a Chill September Day

By : HeliosIkari
  • From ANON - rina on November 06, 2005
    Heh, that was cut at just the right spot. As a fellow dreamer, I know how annoying that alarm clock can be and how it can ruin what is otherwise a very promising and sexy dream! Hey, I also read your other story, with all those hot-looking vampires in it. I had been meaning to leave you a review so I'll do it here. I really enjoyed the level of detail you put into the fic describing what everyone looked like. I love it when authors do that as it makes it easier to visualise in my mind, especially when I don't know who the characters are and I didn't know any of them except for MJ. But I did love them all. I also thought the sex was well-written with just the right amount of emotion. I thought it was great that you are such a loyal and devoted fan of Michael Jackson and could tell that from the way you wrote about him and how you fixed his cosmetic problems. Personally, I thought he looked his best around the "Bad" era, before he screwed his face up too much. If only he'd stopped there...
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