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Reviews for Breaking the haze

By : CherubChild

From ClawedMoon on August 08, 2010
Keep going this is cute~!
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From yersifanel on December 14, 2009
Make me happy, continue!
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From yersifanel on September 10, 2009
Nice, very nice. Please continue!
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From ANON - Valo on December 17, 2006
Ieeeeee. More, please?

-x-Valo
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From ANON - shiela on October 13, 2006
Yummy...I love the shirt chapter too...they are wonderful.
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From LePetitMort on August 05, 2006
*dances* You finally updated! First off...I love it because I love all Jon/Munky.

One thing, there's just a few formatting errors, some stuff missing quotes, that's about it.

Owie...poor Jon, no lube? That's a true masochist. :D

I'm hoping that you'll be writing more, I love your stuff.
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From ANON - Le Petit Mort on July 03, 2006
*whimpers* More? Please?
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From ANON - Nay on December 21, 2005
That's all!!! *whines impatiently* More!

You kind of changed around the narative here...it was odd. Try to stick to just one narative style.
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From on December 18, 2005
omg i love you
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From ANON - Nay on December 18, 2005
Great job babe! Very sexy... ^.^

Lucky girl, you got to meet the boys. Congrats to you though!

*sits and stares with big puppy eyes* More pwetty pwease?
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From ANON - the mutt on December 13, 2005
um.. must sound like a perv... but um.. continue
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From ANON - Tina on December 12, 2005
For the love of god, finish this fic. I need more, dammit! *loves author* i don't mean to be cross. I heart your work, and would like to see more, so kindly add on. ^ ^ -T
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From on December 07, 2005
omg! i would so totally love you forever if you updated.
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From ANON - Phoenixx on November 28, 2005
I realy like your story! You should update it..
In fact. I request you update it :P lol
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