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Reviews for On fire

By : Kat1975
  • From ANON - Random Reader on December 29, 2005
    Oh yeah, liked the shower scene very much... More more more!
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  • From ANON - rebecca on December 26, 2005
    very nice! let her be vulnerable. let him help her. let it be nice for a change. why can't anybody have happy perfect stories? you know, a little escape? get on with the great sex already and why does she not yet know his profession?
    very nice keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Mona on December 24, 2005
    Interesting. She seems like a different person from the girl in chapter 1. The sexy chick in the club would never have been such a klutz to crack her head open. It's also out of character for Gerry to set rules about not touching, especially after the club scene. Oh and the jerk-off scene was too gross.
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on December 23, 2005
    Very different, I agree, but it's really good. Plus it fits into the story, so WOW!!! *lol* I'm amazed!! :)
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  • From ANON - rebecca on December 23, 2005
    yes yes yes!
    make it nice
    continue!
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  • From ANON - Random Reader on December 22, 2005
    Chapter 13 was lovely! I thoroughly enjoyed it! It's a bit odd that Tamsin doesn't know that he's an actor, but I'm sure there's a good explanation :)
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  • From ANON - Em on December 21, 2005
    That was really beautiful. By far the best chapter so far.
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  • From ANON - Random Reader on December 20, 2005
    Hallelujah!! Yes yes yes!!!!
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  • From ANON - rebecca on December 19, 2005
    yes yes yes!!!
    ok ok keep going you are on the right track!!
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on December 19, 2005
    I definitely want more!! *lol* The last few paragraphs were pretty dark and sad, but very, very good. Hope you'll continue in a mixture like that cuz I absolutely love this story!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Random Reader on December 19, 2005
    Why is he calling Rachel? Why didn't they have sex even if both wanted to? Why didn't she pull a sicky when The Gerard Butler was staying over at her place? Argh, I don't understand this woman??!!!!! Sorry, just showing how much I'm pulled into this story... I guess it's not going to be easy for our beloved couple... Please keep on writing, love to see where this is going. Yes please, I want more!!
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  • From ANON - rebecca on December 18, 2005
    Rachel? Rachel? where did that come from ??

    No No get back on track
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  • From ANON - heather on December 16, 2005
    Loving it darling! I couldn't ask for a better Gerry fanfic! Looking forward to more...
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  • From InfernalParadise on December 14, 2005
    Start doing a really terrible chapter, so I can give you some flames, too! *lol* Just kidding... this update is as good as the others before it were, so please, please more!! I absolutely love it!! :) And it looks like we could get some pretty hot smut in the next chapter... ;)
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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on December 11, 2005
    I already did the survey, don't worry. Was kinda fun anyway since I love doing polls and that stuff. :) As for the chapter... well, pretty, pretty realistic. And it even was pretty in its own kinda way. ;) I think I definitely like your style and how everything develops, so please continue!!! :)
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