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Reviews for Sweet Kisses

By : darkstorm888
  • From gena08 on March 24, 2007
    oh my...goshhh...i just came across this story ...and i cannot describe in words how great it was! Wentworth miller is the sexiest man alive everrr....i just love him in prison break...every single thing about him...those abs, his eyes...k im gonna stop...but i just wanna repeat that you re doing a great job with this cause its not too cliche...pleaseeee please continueee....you have to....at least for me...i promise my sad enthusiasm for your story makesup for every single other person...pleaseee continue with this story..or i shall inundate you with annoying reviews....haha
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  • From ANON - Gezille on November 25, 2006
    I love this! This story is fuckign amazing! Write more!
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  • From ANON - Gezille on November 25, 2006
    I love this! This story is fuckign amazing! Write more!
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  • From ANON - Megan on October 30, 2006
    I have to say It was pretty good. And Wentworth Miller was just the perfect touch.
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  • From ANON - Jolinar on October 27, 2006
    Ooooh you wicked, wicked girl!!! I like!
    J xx
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  • From ANON - stina on October 17, 2006
    I hope you have more
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  • From ANON - Jen on August 23, 2006
    Well, the 2nd chapter is kind of choppy, but it was hot, so that doesn't matter.

    I guess what I mean by choppy is just the way it looks on the screen, kind of run on, but it's still good, so keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - leslie on August 23, 2006
    wow! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat story! i love wentworth miller!
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  • From ANON - Almasx on June 27, 2006
    this isn't Instant Messaging, learn to type properly
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  • From ANON - K.R on June 27, 2006
    I'm definitely enjoying the basic plot of this story. Naturally bad girl bringing out the animal in W.Miller, the idea is good! There are just a few things I would watch out for though. I know that spelling, punctuation, and capitals may not seem that important, but they do effect the story the reader gets, so try your best to do full spellings, correct punctuation, and capitals on their names. Also watch your tense, and make sure that you stay in one tense, preferably past tense. Things can't be jumping from "he said" to "she wraps", they're two different tenses which makes the story confusing. I know the review may not seem that nice, but keep in mind I'm only trying to help you grow as a writer. You have a wonderful ideas and a good imagination, don't let those small things bring your story down!
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  • From ANON - YouShould?MYsanity on June 25, 2006
    amazing
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  • From ANON - Unive on May 28, 2006
    Just the next fucking chapter up!! I wanna see whats next.
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  • From ANON - BUDDHA on January 13, 2006
    THAT WAS GREAT. I DEFINITELY WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
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  • From msscelestal on January 09, 2006
    more, more, more!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - BitterAndDeranged on December 28, 2005
    More please? I'd like to see how things turn out...^_^
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