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Reviews for Slavery

By : dandlthoughts
  • From ANON - Julilly on April 16, 2004
    I have to agree...you should get a beta reader. It's hard to follow the story because of the format/spelling/grammar. Definite potential though.
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  • From ANON - Nania on March 03, 2004
    Sorry but the bad grammar and spelling on this are real turn offs. I'm not sure why it's been rated so highly as the story doesn't flow at all. You really need to get a beta reader.
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  • From ANON - Pita on September 30, 2003
    This was an awesome adult fan fiction. The emotions you captured, the realism of your whole story, and even the idea of it was awesome... I can't wait for the next chapter.... Please Update soon..
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2003
    ew, she's 5'2" and weights 150?!?!? she's fat!!!eeewwwww
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  • From ANON - Dawn on August 18, 2003
    keep wrighting
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  • From ANON - lisa on August 18, 2003
    so far its good keep writing
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  • From ANON - CV on August 07, 2003
    Great story, keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2003
    keep writing
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