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Reviews for Blurring the Lines of Wrong & Right

By : druscillaryan
  • From SlackerBitch on February 10, 2007
    This story is sick and fucking twisted, and yet I can't look away. I really love your story Dru, can't wait to read more, please update. It's goddamn beautiful. I especially liked the jealousy shown on Billie's part that you portrayed by saying: "They look at you when you’re dressed like that, Adie. I don’t want anyone lookin’ at you but me."
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  • From ANON - arzosah30 on September 29, 2006
    I don't get to AFF much...so I hadn't seen this before.. I have no siblings so I've always wondered how teenage siblings that don't hate each others guts don't cross the line in that time of experimentation. One of the taboos of Western society.. like sodomy, I suppose.

    I really liked this line:

    "And Billie hated himself for smelling the vanilla scent of her hair and memorizing it, hating himself later when he thought of it while making his wrists ache alone in his bed."

    It shows his attraction and his guilt in that one line. I love how you've shown that their love is consuming here & now and that they are ignoring consequences of their actions... to just think about it later...which we all seem to do when we're in love/lust..

    Can we expect any further updates on this? I really am loving your "Billie Jo", but I hate not knowing what happens to characters. With Adie preggers, I can see troubled times ahead...

    I'm a sucker for happy endings, but unless they find adoption papers under Ollie's bed, I can see that I may be disappointed...

    As always I love your work..your stories often taking something that is usually not talked about and making it real and always memorable..
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  • From ANON - Loz on June 14, 2006
    I really like the concept of this story!! I'm really enjoying It!!! write more soon please! I can't get enough!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2006
    I love the idea of Billie and Adie being siblings! I always thought
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2006
    Very nice and well written! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Katimus prime on April 24, 2006
    I didn't really notice an accent, weird or otherwise. keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Katimus prime on April 22, 2006
    I am definitely digging this story. please keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Katimus prime on April 21, 2006
    Interesting. The concept is a little bit weird but I generally enjoy offbeat stories. please continue!
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