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Reviews for In Dreams Begin Responsibilities

By : MsMercury
  • From MsBlades on April 04, 2007
    I started this story thinking I would just read a few chapters now and a few later, boy, was I wrong! I had to finish it, I couldn't stop reading! It is very well written and I loved how the supernatural theme was written into the story line. I couldn't wait to see how it all turned out for Kayleigh and Costa and also, how Criss would take the news of his dead fathers visits. Will there be more to this story? One can only hope!
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  • From ANON - Amie on September 08, 2006
    I just wanted to say I think this is a very well written story. And I do believe a first for this site!
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  • From ANON - Ravina Angel on July 18, 2006
    Ohhh hun the story was very well written, it made me feel as if I was there. The drama and romance you added to this was exceptionally good. I'm not just saying that. I could picture everything as it was happening, and I could see it all, it was very realistic. You have a gift, I think the only things I would change are the way you write the times, like for example instead of writing three PM it would look better as either 3PM or 3:00PM it's shorter and easier to write.
    The subject on the story is very interesting, psychics and such, it fit the story perfectly. If this was a book I'd buy it. I'll be honest, I could not stop reading this story I read it all in one fitting, it was like those books that are too good to put down, that was exactly how I felt.
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  • From ANON - Natasha on July 07, 2006
    I think it's awesome. Really cool that you wrote a story like this. You are talented, and I cant wait to read more of it!
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