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Reviews for Blue Eyes

By : sparky1983
  • From ANON - Lucifera Black on September 06, 2006
    GOOD GOD!!!! this is my new favourite fic! it is unbelievably sexy, and hot and cute and wonderful all at the same time. good job!

    ~Lucifera Black
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2006
    That was really good. Great Job!
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  • From ANON - Le Petit Mort on July 28, 2006
    Haha, uhm, exuse my stupid typing. I don't know how I managed to repeat a whole sentence.
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  • From ANON - Le Petit Mort on July 28, 2006
    You switched POV for a few sentances, (instead of she it turned to I) I think it was unintentional, but just to let you know! And, put spaces between paragraphs and dialoge, it makes it SO much easier to read.

    Now that I'm done with some constructive critism, to croon.

    I don't like m/f normally, but... Davey is just too cute to resist! You're wondefully descriptive, which is really nice to see in a story like
    I don't like m/f normally, but... Davey is just too cute to resist! You're wondefully this.

    Hmm...and the idea of writing Davey's perspective is slightly intruiging. I might do it, I'm not too sure. I'll let you know if I decide too.

    Well done.
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