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Reviews for Five Guys in One Lockerrom

By : Reema
  • From Mikai on June 10, 2007
    lmao!
    "Stephanie, I want a divorce".
    Greatness. XD
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  • From Siarra on February 10, 2007
    Hmm, I suppose this story could've worked, but at least an elementary spell check would've been necessary for that. I'm certain that there wasn't a single sentence in there without at least one mistake...
    Other than that, well, while even grown men can be incredibly juvenile at times, it would've been better if you hadn't rushed the story quite this badly. Instead let the situation grow so that the different acts would've had some degree of plausibility. Now it just leaves the reader wondering as the guys jump at each others' bones without preamble. Also there's room for plenty of more dialogue, like the guys giving teasing comments when the others start feeling the heat, so to speak. Some general description would've been nice, to make us find out how the guys felt during all these little upsets, and it would give the situation more gravity and staying power, instead of jumping from one act to another and trying to top the previous one.
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  • From reach666 on January 27, 2007
    the story is good, but you do notice that they're six, right?
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