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Reviews for 14 Years

By : lunavin
  • From pixelfaerie on July 09, 2018

    You’re definitely one of my favorite authors now. There was so much I loved about this as your other stories. First, the characterization was phenomenal as always. I don’t read too much stories with Fran involved, but it was nice seeing her here. Now you characterized her was so lovely. Also, It was such a pleasure to read the flashbacks during each decade between James and Jason. The emotions between the two were so realistic, at moments at felt like I was either going to squeal or cry. I also enjoyed seeing other familiar faces like Slash—it was a nice touch. Now only if him and Axl would get along! Your stories have definitely become favorites of mine, and I’ll have to come back to reread them. 


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  • From ANON - Virtual Bettie on October 28, 2008
    Better late than never or a review, right? I like the song for the ending, of course how could I NOT like Led Zep. Nice happy ending with an understanding between all parties involved, and the boys getting basically what they've been yearning for and a little peace of mind too. Don't get much better than that.

    P.S.
    The back door man comment also had me laughing much like James, as well as the gay cowboys from hell one.
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  • From ANON - Virtual Bettie on August 12, 2008
    Wow, that was an interesting ending, love Slash's guest appearence. It was kinda sad, like they still hadn't come to a closer in the relationship, well not completely. Still good stuff, I know others are reading it, too bad they aren't leaving comments too. Guess it's just me as your star commenter!
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  • From ANON - Virtual Bettie on July 09, 2008
    a) I love that RHCP song
    b) I love James, Jason and Lars (and Kirk,Rob, Cliff and even Dave)
    c) I love this fic, thanks for keeping it up. I hope the expectation of the new album inspires you to write.

    It's so nice that it's well thought out and not just scenes of the boyz macking on each other (not that there's anything wrong with that).
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  • From ANON - Virtual Bettie on June 30, 2008
    Yeah, it's me again. I certainly like the character dynamics in this story. The sex scenes were steamy and did not detract from the story at all, very nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Virtual Bettie on June 17, 2008
    Hey, glad you're still writing this story. I really like the conversation between the two J's, it's very well thought out. I also like the past/present flipping of the story as well as the James'/Jason's POVs.
    Keep it up, it's great. And thanks for not trying to white-wash Fran and the kids, it a great twist that Jason is thinking about them.
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  • From ANON - Virtual Bettie on February 05, 2008
    Glad you are continuing this fiction, I need some good reading material. And let's face it James is hot, LOL.
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