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Reviews for More than a feeling

By : Alaine
  • From ANON - TheQuietOne on November 07, 2009
    Fantastic thus far! I like where it's going, I know I'm probably like a yearr late, but, I still loove it! :D I like how you made Missy have actual feelings as opposed to just making her cheat and being like, poof gone, vam sex ensues. (Though I still loooove that.. xD) Can't wait to read more!
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  • From cyrtanthus on March 03, 2009
    It's good, the only thing I found a little unbelievable was how Ville kept calling Bam "sweetheart" or "bammie". That just seemed weird and awkward... I imagine them having a more... I dunno.... abusive relationship, so to speak. If they had pet names for each other, I don't think they'd be so sweet. Good writing though, I like the story so far.
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  • From GentooNiXGeek on February 19, 2008
    This is really good for you first fic. Can't wait to read more.
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