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Reviews for Baby Can I Hold You

By : writer101
  • From ctallent on May 10, 2009
    no no no, things were just starting to get good between them....
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  • From ctallent on May 07, 2009
    yay, its about time.... go carrie
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  • From ctallent on May 06, 2009
    very sweet, things are looking good for them now.... hopefully paul stays away for good.....
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  • From Violence on May 06, 2009
    'The only time you call is when it's bad news.Never think of calling and inviting me to Sunday lunch?' Haha, that's so true. ROFL, Kelly's blue balling Carrie! That was hilarious. I love that Jason is never taken seriously especially when Carrie calls him 'big guy.' Poor guy needs to find some male friends.
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  • From ctallent on May 05, 2009
    oh man, poor carrie... glad jason is there to protect them...
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  • From ctallent on May 04, 2009
    lol the ending was hilarious, kelly knows she has carrie right where she wants her... hopefully paul wont find them... elle is so cute
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  • From greens28 on May 04, 2009
    This is just so interesting. I really am enjoying it more & more with each chapter. They sure do have a smart 4-year old..Too bad she has such a rotten dad...but 2 moms will work just fine. Awesome update.
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  • From Violence on May 01, 2009
    Okay, honestly my first thought after reading this was 'THERE'S A BOMB IN THE BAG. RUN. FLEE!' But then I realized that that would be retarded. Man, Paul's such a douchebag. I really hope he gets run over by a semi.
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  • From ctallent on April 30, 2009
    what the heck is this crazy woman leaving her baby.....
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  • From Violence on April 29, 2009
    Hahahah, at them attempting to ignore Elle but failing. Oh damn, I don't think this is going to end well at all. But would Paul really be that smart? And how the fuck did that woman find the house? I loved that moment of Kelly and Carrie fighting over who would stay and who would go. That protectiveness is cute. The Paul thing is just strange though.
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  • From Violence on April 27, 2009
    ROFL. I knew the whole Carrie being the dude of the family would come up. And it was done brilliantly too. 'It's not funny.' 'It's not.' 'Then why you laughing.' 'Cause it's funny?' That was both cute and funny. But the part where Kelly/June were horrified while Carrie/Mark looked amused was hilarious and a nice way to show how they're a family.
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  • From ctallent on April 27, 2009
    ha ha, very funny chapter... carrie being the man lol.... these two are so cute together
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  • From Violence on April 26, 2009
    Lmao at Carrie not wanting to let Elle go to school or out of her sight. That shows pure love and dedication on her part. Then the part where Kelly called Elle their daughter was a total heart stealer. Sarcastic Carrie wins at life, lol.
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  • From ctallent on April 25, 2009
    this was a funny and sweet chapter... poor carrie didnt wanna leave elle... they are soooo cute
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  • From ctallent on April 23, 2009
    very good update glad kelly is coming around now....
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