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Reviews for The Secrets Between us

By : writer101
  • From Violence on July 24, 2009
    Damn, knocked two of them out in one shot. Either way I loved how this one ended as well is not for the simple fact that it's a happy ending. You have no idea how much I love happy endings. After many, many years of reading decent stories with angsty endings that pretty much kill all my love for the story, it gets old and repetitive. But fuck, I can never get tired of a happy ending. This one was too cute, I had a happy grin on my face by the end. Thank you for being great.
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  • From ctallent on July 21, 2009
    great ending to this story as well, and yes on a sequel...thanks for the updates on all four stories...
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  • From Violence on July 19, 2009
    OMG. Babies! “Kelly am I crazy or does she look like you.” Lololol. It actually wasn't that guy that got Carrie pregnant, it was really Kelly and her mystical impregnating powers. Overall, this chapter was plain fucking adorable.
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  • From ctallent on July 14, 2009
    aw the babies are here now...very sweet update, kelly seems sooo happy...great ending too..cant wait for more
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  • From Violence on July 09, 2009
    BABY TIME. She gettin' a c-section or are they gonna come out the normal? If they're coming out the normal way then Kelly's hand will undoubtably be broken when it's all over, lol.
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  • From ctallent on July 08, 2009
    aw sweet update, so the kids are coming... poor girls they are in for it.....
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  • From Violence on July 03, 2009
    AWWWW!! That Carrie/Jeanne bonding was so damn cute. I could burst. It's nice to know the girl have Reba and Jeanne there telling they won't fuck up.
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  • From greens28 on June 27, 2009
    Awesome update. Great job
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  • From Violence on June 26, 2009
    Waddling pregnant women always make me laugh. LOL everyone's always commenting on the one thing that pisses Carrie off the most. Also chuckled at the fact that they make this fucking exam table so high for pregnant women who generally can't do any movement other than walking. Can't wait til them little suckers pop out. They're gonna be the cutest, most dysfunctional family ever. Last two lines were really adorable.
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  • From ctallent on June 23, 2009
    lol poor kelly... now the fun begins haha great update cant wait for the next one
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  • From Violence on June 21, 2009
    Bwahaha. Ashley's such a tard, looking in the cupboards for Carrie, xD. Lol, Kelly should really have learned by now that pregnant women are evil.
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  • From Violence on June 18, 2009
    Both of their insecturities shows here but miraculously they quell each others but not without a little quarrel thrown in there. Being preggers is definitely not helping them, lol.
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  • From greens28 on June 13, 2009
    Cute & sweet. Love stubborn Carrie. Great job!!!
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  • From Violence on June 08, 2009
    So short but so awesome. I seriously just laughed at the giving a 'helping hand' comment. Oh I bet she is. I wonder what Carrie's gonna do to Kelly now.
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  • From Violence on June 02, 2009
    "Or Kelly would be..." Or Kelly would be what!? HAHAHAHA... "Yexan." Obviously I laughed at that. Damn, Carrie, those hormones are making you whacked out. You Kelly couldn't leave you in the cold, dark, and cruel world by yourself with two babies. I find the whole saying of "our babies" insanely adorable.
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