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Reviews for Right Kind Of Wrong

By : writer101
  • From ctallent on April 15, 2009
    lol, oh my gosh that ending was hilarious.... you cant cure being homsexual....lol thanks for the updates
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  • From Violence on April 12, 2009
    The ending was brilliant. Now I know that this isn't going to be the end of the Carrie/Kelly interaction, otherwise the story would most likely end here. I was surprised that Kelly actually came out and said 'yup, i'm gay. problem?' Maybe she'll give Kelly the cold shoulder, maybe she'll freak out if Kelly can't contain herself, maybe she'll send Kelly into a catatonic state or a depressive, hell, maybe she'll turn out to be okay with it and ask Kelly how she knew. So many possiblities.
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  • From Violence on April 10, 2009
    woohoo for first alone interaction. I think it's just gonna make KC go even crazier. Wow, ha, I just know that ride in the car is either gonna break her down or build her up. The only bad part about first person is that I can't even judge Carrie because it's all be mangulated by her brain. This is one of those times that being left in the dark is a good thing though.
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  • From greens28 on April 08, 2009
    Awesome updates...I am totally digging this fic. I do have one question though...Has kelly actually even spoken to Carrie at all? I don't remember reading it...but just checking? Anyway, U are doing a wonderful job..I don't know where U find all the different story ideas & time to update them all the same day. KUDOS to U!!!!
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  • From Violence on April 07, 2009
    Damn. Why do I have a feeling Kelly's gonna call in someone like either David or Graham? "I putted my phone" Okay, so I shouldn't really be pointing out unintentional grammer mistakes but that made me laugh. I think hiding her feelings for Carrie is gonna cause more harm than good. We'll just have to wait and see. 'Or I could jump up on my seat and shout it's her it's her.........' That made me lmao pretty hard. I'm a sucker for sarcasm.
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  • From Violence on April 04, 2009
    I loved that opening paragraph. Girl is boardering on obessive. Rofl, at Emma making a pass at Ashley and at Jason marrying some random chick in vegas. Also loved the explaination of why she couldn't live without Ashley. I laughed so hard when Ashley called Simon Sid. Annie and Sid. Too funny.
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  • From Violence on March 22, 2009
    I was sympathizing with Emma until the last bit because she just came off as irritating the whole time. haha, I agree. Kelly is screwed up.
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  • From greens28 on March 21, 2009
    Just read Ch 5-this fic is moving along quite nicely. Awesome job.
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  • From Violence on March 21, 2009
    I couldn't stop laughing after the whole Annie thing. Hell, I'm still giggling about it. Especially this line "England did sound like a good idea but I knew Annie would hate it, just as much as she would hate her new name." Just for the fact that Kelly called her Annie in her head. Aw, Kelly's a little heart breaker. Hope she at least calls Emma back or something. It's not nice to just leave a girl hanging or lead her on. Can't wait to see just how much this Carrie infatuation has manifested.
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  • From greens28 on March 19, 2009
    This one is starting to get better & better with each chapter. I like the little comments between Kelly/Simon ( as long as he doesn't turn on her & blackmail's her). Anyway, Great job..More awesome reading to do....Thanks to U. Love it!!!
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  • From Violence on March 19, 2009
    Hmmm, dear Kelly's got commintment issues. Love that Simon teases Kelly and that he told her how to get the tapes. See? He's a nice guy.
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  • From KindlyUnspoken on March 19, 2009
    I love that Ashley can see right through Kelly. And their banter was really cute and funny too. I really doubt Kelly's going to be able to stay away from Carrie once the show really kicks off. The last paragraph of the second chapter is one I really love. I love the comparison made between the girls. And the third chapter, oh lord, I was laughing so hard at the beginning. Ashley's excuse for Kel was great and she's right, Kelly shouldn't avoid this other girl even though Carrie's now in the picture. The "bitch" comment, that's priceless. I love how Simon was actually being nice for once and gave Kelly a way to get Carrie's audition. Great updates, cannot wait for more.
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  • From Violence on March 18, 2009
    lol, I love it when Ashley teases Kelly. Yeah right, don't mess with the contestants. We'll see how long that one lasts. And at the rate Kelly's going she's gonna be all over Carrie the next time she sees her.
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  • From greens28 on March 18, 2009
    As Randy would say..."You blew it out the box, dog". Great start-I am loving this take on Carrie/ Kelly fic. It is different & has my interst 100%. Keep going-you are on to something.
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  • From KindlyUnspoken on March 17, 2009
    I bow to your ability to have four fics going at once, that really takes skill. And you've definitely got it. I love the premise of this, it's a really interesting twist. I am also loving the first person point of view, I really think it will add a bunch to the fic, plus it helps capture what is being described. The first sentence just grabbed my attention and pulled me in, as the rest of the paragraph had me laughing at the image created. The audition before Carrie's had me laughing so hard at the dialogue, especially at the "Well find a lawyer and sue your singing teacher" bit. I too love the fact that Kelly's already gay, it adds some great teasing with Simon as you've shown already. I really love this line too: "There was no crazy vibe from her at all" and just how Kelly's already enamored with Carrie. Honestly, I cannot wait for the next update to see where you take this.
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