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Reviews for Breaking The Girl

By : EarthToBella
  • From EarthToBella on August 06, 2009
    Hey! here's the link...

    http://member.mibba.com/104884/

    Make sure you friend me ;)

    xo
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  • From southerngirl on August 06, 2009
    awwww i would LOVE to have your mibba link. i have an account there. i check that more often than here love. PLEASE send. you can even send it to my email to ensure i get it
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  • From hilikus on July 09, 2009
    woah... i really hope brandon has a good explanation for this bullshit... i mean?! hello?! he lost his "temper"?! what is his definition of temper?? damn, you did a good job on this one because i actually was afriad of brandon when i read that! i wanna know whats up with him and what happened to bri! what a cliffhanger! aaaannnd you gotta update
    blink and you miss a beat, dont get me wrong i love this story but the nice brandon is a nice change for once in a while :) thanks so much for constantly updatjng the stories!!!!
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  • From oliversangel on June 22, 2009
    A spanking....she so deserved that. How could she do that in his home? Brandon is totally right of course, about her having to test everyone's limits. And she does need breaking. *nods* I am eager to see what happens when Brandon finds out about her past. And also Holy Monkey! She brained herself with the floor. That is so something I would do. I am mad clumsy...I wonder if they are going to see the welts on her bum at the hopsicle...or is he rich enough to have a dr make a housecall, with portable eqiptment...will she have amnesia when she wakes up? Will she still be mad at him? Or be all clingy and such? Oh you are killing me here. Great chapter as always love. I can't wait to read more!

    XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on June 18, 2009
    Haha!! Magnificent member. That was fantastic. Well, miss lady likes being a princess again, and interesting how she is starting to get attached to him for reasons other than supernova-like orgasms. LOL. Oh dear. A party. That is a bad bad bad bad bad idea miss brianna. bad bad. See your AN made me think he wouldn't be mad, and then I think that you would expect us to think that, I'm not sure dude, but I think there is a flogging or at the very least all kinds of kinky and drepraved punishments in her future. LOL. Sorry it took me so long to r&r...having problems with pc and life is being especially helacious to me. *sigh*

    XXOO
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  • From hilikus on June 14, 2009
    duhh that's not a good idea...not at all. brandon seems like a private person and i'm sure he'll be pissed when he finds out about that party. all these strangers invading his personal space or so.

    just a question: is brandon the singer of incubus in this story? if yes...where the hell did bri live the past 10 years?!?!
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  • From hilikus on May 09, 2009
    damn!! so...erm i'm at a loss for words i don't know what to say. i mean he wants her to move in? which is interesting, i hope she'll say yes. it's unpredictable and exciting!! god i love that story!! update asap

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  • From oliversangel on May 05, 2009
    Well shit woman!! God damn that was hot! LOL. Poor Bri didn't even know she liked being dominated. I can only guess what she is going to say. "Go to hell you crazy bastard!!" Or...."Yes, Mr. Boyd, I loved being pounded into oblivion by your magnificent member, and I think I would die without having it every day." LOL. I am really loving this story. And I can't wait to read more.

    XXOO
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  • From southerngirl on May 02, 2009
    you must keep writing. i remember being younger and reading fan fiction. i almost forgot about it and honestly, i don't know what brought me to looking it up. please please please keep writing love!

    brittany
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  • From hilikus on April 13, 2009
    just saw that you put up another story. i like it so far. :) but i need to read some more to get used to ...strange brandon. :)
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  • From oliversangel on April 01, 2009
    Teehee!! He has magical headache removal powers. LOL. So, it's a cat and mouse game now. Briana knows what Brandon says is true, and he wants to show her what it's like to not have control. *shivers in anticipation* I can't wait until things really get going. I wonder if she is going to tell him about her backround? I'm sure he'll try and drag it out of her. Sneaky man for getting her out of work, and for finding out where she lives. So stoked about the dinner date. I wonder how far Brandon is going to push things. See, I've got all kinds of dirty things running through my mind...I'm pretty kinky. LOL. I wasn't expecting another update so soon, so yay!!!

    XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on March 31, 2009
    Yay!! I'm the cats pajamas!! LOL. That was good and steamy. Nice description of the lap dance. You know, I've never thought of Brandon as a domineering sort of person, he looks to be quiet and shy, although the quiet ones are always the freaks. LOL. I can't wait to read the next chapter tomorrow!! hurray!! I wonder if he will come back, or will he stay away and punish her? Hmmm, this is very intriguing, I'm on the edge of my seat here woman!! ^.^

    XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on March 30, 2009
    GAAAAHHH! You canNOT leave it there!! That is an evil evil evil cliffie!! I loved the beginning, very hot!! I like that sort of thing, though it seems to not be everyone's cup of tea. ^.^ This is a great start so far, and somehow, at the beginning of the story, once we started reading about Briana, and how she hated her life, and that she was moving to Hollywood, I had a strong feeling that she would be a stripper, well actually, prostitute, but that's only cause I have 'Pretty Woman' on the brain. LOL. I can't wait to read more!!

    XXOO
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    ps - I've also got three chapters of a Pirates of the Caribbean story in my movies section if you're interested. ^.^
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