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Reviews for Silence

By : kimbk
  • From ANON - lain517 on March 04, 2012
    Thank you so much for such beautiful story. Everything was perfect, from the way you described them as simply people with complex emotions and confused
    by they're own feelings and miss communications. It was refreshing just to see it play out in a real life situation. One that could be actually plausible. It was just so heart breakingly tragic and pure at the same time. Through out each chapter I had to take breaks and just absorbe it.
    I'd love it if you did a piece from Till's view point. I know Richard may be easier ( he would be for me if I wrote one). But you just captured being a mature adult so well. Plus the final part of them just enjoying each other after so long, I've been to that point in my own personal life and you caught that moment exactly.
    So again thank you and I hope to read more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - NoX on February 24, 2012
    Okay, I pondered over this for a day if I should write anything. I don't sent out my opinions that often, because I know there is no need for me to blabber about stupid stuff, but this time I felt the need to speak up. Finally I decided to just do it, even if I might not have anything of interest to say. This is not a review, because I am shitty at giving those.

    First of all I need to mention that I only started to read this story out of pure boredom and because there was nothing else to do. Otherwise I wouldn't have picked it up. Don't get me wrong, I'm a huge Till/Richard fan and like to find and read stories about them, but I always hunt for the ones that lead into sex scenes. This story had none, so I was reluctant on picking it up. Again, if I hadn't been utterly bored and in terrible need of Till/Richard fix, I wouldn't have opened this.

    But oh sweet mother of God, how am I glad I did. I instantly grew to like this after reading just couple first sentences in the first chapter. The setting was nice and I soon grew to appreciate how this fic spans over many years instead of just hopping to things.
    I admit I was a bit hesitant when Caron Bernstein was added to the mix. Naturally she would be in this type of story, but I'm just instantly put off by fics that bring the band members family into the story. I was positively baffled when I didn't instantly hate the story when she came along, even if I jumped few lines. The fic didn't get worse for me but it just grew more depth. It was amazing.

    I for one love the fact that you used lyrics more than once, and it felt superb to listen the mentioned songs while they were present in the story. At one point – might have been during the big Emigrate fight – I was even speculating if you'd use Ich tu dir weh for some interesting twist in the story. That would have been so good.

    Also I really like how the characters are portrayed. They all have such nice, fascinating and believable ways of expressing themselves. Really gives the reader a sense that you aren't reading a fanfic, but some actual document of what has happened in reality. That is incredibly good ting when it comes to fanfiction. I love all the six, and would have liked to see more entertaining twists.

    Then I also love that this fic has exactly what I always need from fanfiction – detailed description of emotions the main character is going through. I love it. This fic had mostly stuff from Kruspe's point of view and you did a perfect job displaying his emotions. I might have still hoped for more small seemingly insignificant moments in the story, just for the atmosphere. Like details about them making the videos and songs – for example when they were filming Mann gegen mann, how'd Kruspe like that or how he liked being dragged around in the mud pit while filming Mein Teil, and so on.
    And more explanations to the rather intriguing lyrics of Emigrate would have been fascinating.

    I honestly never thought I could like a fic without sex this much. This has so much emotion and a beautiful story structure, that I'm not even missing the dirty stuff! There have been more than couple of instances when I have cursed to Kruspe to just kiss the man already and that is exactly the kind of feeling I hope to have when reading! This is the type of story where sex would just feel out of place and that is why this might be my favorite T/R story of all time. That decision is fully depending on what the last chapter is going to be like. At this point I am afraid I won't like the ending, because this chapter was just too magnificent.

    I love how all the others knew all along, and when Landers and Riedel took Kruspe to have a heart to heart.. Seriously, I would have started clapping if I hadn't been worried I would have woken up my girlfriend. Such an amazing story and there isn't enough words to describe how good this chapter was. That's where my worry comes in again. This chapter had such a huge emotional breakthrough, that how can this be ended in just one chapter after it? I fear that it will just abruptly stop with a confession and a kiss. I hope that is not the case, and hopefully the next one will be a fitting end to a superb story. Frankly I'd hope you'd change your mind and make it at least two more chapters, just so that there'd be enough time to sort out all the feelings.

    Amazing work and I hope to see much more from you. Longer!
    Thank you for doing this, it has been a great pleasure.
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