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By : Nesha

From ANON - Aria on April 22, 2012
WHYYYYYYYYYYY HOV WHYYYYYYYY! -cries-

Poor Chris and Rih, again I'm lost of words, this story sounds fucking real to me lol.
Nesha tell me from what camp are you from? Rih or Chris? #Iwonttell

can't wait for chapter 18.

Anyway, I read your rant book on the chrianna tumblr. kudos.
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From ANON - Parminder on April 22, 2012
Chapter 17 is too sad.....i hope things will get better....love ur fanfic!!!
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From ANON - Stacy on April 21, 2012
As for Chris, he's been really erking my nerves lately, to the point where I'm seriously considering unfollowing his ass on twitter, I don't even wanna see his tweets right now. He seems to have a fetish of making everything more difficult than it needs to be, ugh! And as for his prepubescent indentured servant she makes my skin crawl, I seriously wish someone would do to her what just happened to Chris in ch.17, I know it might sound evil ,but hey it's the truth, *shrug. Aghhh she makes me sick. I can't stand her ass!!! Anyway, back to the story, what the hell Nesha? I'm gonna need Jay-Z to trip over hip big ass lip into traffic or something, I can't stand his old bum ass. I hope he gets royally fucked, & preferably sooner than later!!! I'm seriously pissed the fuck off right now, thanks Nesha!! >_
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From ANON - Aly on April 21, 2012
No don't let anything happen to CB, I would love to read about Rihanna being pregnant though
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From ANON - Aria on April 20, 2012
AHHHHHHHH!!! I think I just came 9064478374634 times with their sexy time! I love how Chris didn't let her finish her sentence and kissing her hard! I really found that gesture sexy as fuck. Gets me every time.

And OMG, what are those mofos gonna do with Chris? *Mentally pushes Chris and shield my body on his*

Girl!!!! -cries-
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From ANON - Anna on April 19, 2012
Oh my gosh the last chapters have been nail biting, cliff hangers! i was happy chris and rihanna went the movie premiere together! i was scared for chris getting out the car :)! i love the emotion you portray chris to have its like right on the ball of hard on the outside but soft on the inside! And wait Jay has gotten a little beside himself lol....very intense i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!

Anna
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From ANON - Aria on April 19, 2012
New Meat Alert!

OMG,I don't know what to say but I read this from Chapter 1-15 in a single sitting! My eyes are bleeding lol but I don't care! This story is so GOOD, even BETTER than good!

You're on my to-do list now! Can't wait for more,girlie!

P.S.
Tell us who you really are? Noella? Leandra? ;p
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From ANON - Alice on April 18, 2012
I absolutely love your story, your an amazing writer! =D
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From ANON - Asani on April 17, 2012
jay z..... i don't think there are enough words or adjectives in the known language to truly describe how i feel about that camel looking buzzard... he is too damn invested in rihanna's life and the choices she makes... it goes beyond the money she brings to his pocket... people like him need to realize though and what you put out comes back on you tenfold..... in other words.... some shit is about to come to him and he won't be able to handle it one damn bit and for that i can't wait....

the breakfast in the morning and her feeding him.... can't help but smile over that... cb and rih just being in love and reveling in it is a damn good thing to see and read.... and their conversation with mama j.... i couldn't stop my smile no matter how hard i tried... to know his mama was happy at rih and cb being together again is all that matters.... as long as their folks accept it what jay z, the media, or anyone else got to say about them don't matter...

gotta say love that cb went home to see his mother but bringing the leech crew with him ain't it.... i don't give a damn if karmasutra is threatening to relax in a bathtub full of razor blades her forever being around needs to end. love that he left them at his house and went and stayed with mama... her words to him was true... no matter how badly he wants folks to stop talking and commenting about it what went down between him and rih will never go away. stop running from it and use common sense when folks try to throw it back in his face. in real life it's obvious rih learned this and her responses to these questions reflect it.... i'm ready for cb to get to that point too...

cb and rih convo at the end.... cute too and her agreeing to be in his video.... like that to... gotta confession to make.... today was the first time i ever heard and listened to sweet love... her in that video would work for me... i'm going to need them to work on that possibility for real... as for the song i was talking about.... it's another sex song from cb but he's telling the girl to touch herself how she would want him to touch her.... i thought of rih because her ass if forever groping herself on stage and could bring that to the video... lol

great writing as usual and you telling me you like long reviews have just opened up the damn floodgates.... my ass is long winded even when i'm typing... i'm going to be busting out essays and shit before long.... lol.... can't wait for the next chapters.....
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From ANON - Christy on April 15, 2012
Jay-Z is a freaking hypocrite! and why is he so determined to end what rih and CB have? like is he jealous or sum shit, it irks me that this nigga just can't let them be he acts like CB hit HIM :s like fo'real nigga MOVE THE FUCK ON!!!!
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From ANON - Asani on April 14, 2012
I would rather her be the leading lady in a video for 'Touch Me' [I got the video all worked out in my head] but since that ain't a single I would take her as the leading lady in any video of his.... I would lose myself and what little mind I have..... but until that happens I'll keep replaying my dreamed up video over and over in my head.

Now let me get into these last two chapters.... karmasurta and her tag along are worthless and I want their demise and dismissal from CB's life to be epic... poking holes in condoms...... how damn low can you go? Gotta say I got a damn chuckle out of karmasutra finding out about CB attending the premiere with Rihanna by watching the tv like every other regular folk...... LOVED that part.... lol

Rih and Chris at the premiere... fucking love it. They both were nervous about it but together none of it mattered. Them stopping and doing one interview before going and loving up on the fans... nice doing... If he even attempted to attend it in real life the world would go crazy. Not even as her date but just a fan of those kind of movies me and everyone I know would lose it...lol... and their ride out and dance to the music at the end.... thumbs up from me for that.... loved it!

Jay and his wife.... both them mofos need to sit down and worry about their own damn lives. I think I said before that I don't care much for Jay Z.... times it by two for his wife. Them attempting to hold over not seeing that baby doll as long as Rih sees Chris.... like get the hell out of her with that bullshit.... whether in real life or just this story.... both of them mofos need to get over themselves.

And let me round this review up speaking a little about CB and the possibility of him performing Birthday Cake.... shit would not go down. Point Blank Period. If Rih ain't there to sing it no damn body should be singing it. It wouldn't even be a possibility by the time I would be done... what fixed it in his mind that it was even right to attempt it.... nope nope nope!!! CB ain't exactly high on my list right now and him performing even a portion of it will tip him all the way over to my shit list.

Great writing and if this is you sleepy keep writing!!!
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From ANON - Anna on April 13, 2012
I really love your story so far very intense!(in a good way) :)i was just wonder if you would ever do a flash back to rihanna and chris first time together! i always wondered if rihanna lost her virginity to chris (because i figured chris had already lost it, if his first tattoo at 13 then he was having some other fun if you know what i mean, no shade :) )i have a feeling she did and you are very talented in writing very realistic sex scenes lol and i honestly just want to see how you would interpret it ( Pretty damn good or course) lol Thanks and please thing about it!!

Anna

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From ANON - J on April 11, 2012
Another great chapter (your are a fantastic writer) can't wait for the next update.
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From ANON - christy on April 11, 2012
*waves* hiii lol,
Karrueche is a leech and she knows it -_-
I so wish this story was real *sighs*
i luv it gworl!
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From ANON - Chelsea on April 09, 2012
Kae Better Make That Shit Right, Like Right Df Now Bro
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