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Reviews for The Brothel

By : Foraoo
  • From ANON - Dwight on February 25, 2003
    This is a well written story. Not too many times do I come across a story that can form such vivid imagery in my mind and make me see it while I read it. A great author can do that and this an author that shouldn't be passed over. I throughly enjoyed this story!
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  • From ANON - Leggy on February 25, 2003
    I loved this story right from the start faraoo. It moves quickly and has a continuous plot. I'd love to see where it's going though....you really need to update it!
    Your main character has a lot of personality, and it's interesting to see him progress through-out everythihat hat happens to him, excellent writing styles
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  • From ANON - Ilze on December 11, 2002
    You know, when I read intro of your story for the first time, I decided I won't rit, it, it's not for me (whole idea seemed strange for me - brothel, murder and Darren with all the other characters...)... But somehow... hehe, I read it and I like it very much! You story is so uncommon! I'm very curious about next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Linda on November 11, 2002
    OMG.....What... what a powerful... frightful chapter... I feel so bad for Darren and the ones who didn't 'participate'... yet I think I pity the ones who did...
    This is one... amazing chapter, Foraoo... I look forward to the next chapter. I hope it is more... hopeful (?) than this one.
    Very job job!
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  • From ANON - The Raven: Never More. on October 29, 2002
    I love this story. Not because it has a wide variety of famous faces or for the adult content but because it's a story. There is a plot, there is atmosphere, there are things you'd never get in type of story created by another. You're talented. You should always keep writing, be it to do with adult fiction or something else but you should do it. Not many people have a talent such as yours, and you should use yours as best you can.
    I'm anxious for the next chapter of this amazing creation. And also wondering if you have wrote more stories? I'd love to read them.
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  • From sunhawk on October 29, 2002
    interesting start, i would have liked to get names on who is who because at this point i can't sort it out *giggle* Things got a little confusing during the fight, abrupt i guess is the word, but keep working on it, looks promising! :)
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