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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my...
Very good, very hot.
Wish I had a little more faith in Jay. He went from being kinda nice to being a real jerk.
I wish you'd do another chapter and figure out a happy ending for Amir and Paige.
Very good, very hot.
Wish I had a little more faith in Jay. He went from being kinda nice to being a real jerk.
I wish you'd do another chapter and figure out a happy ending for Amir and Paige.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My first review didn't seem to 'take'.
I really like your writing. You build some very intense scenes.
I wish you'd add a chapter and figure out a way to make a happy ending for Paige and Amir...
I really like your writing. You build some very intense scenes.
I wish you'd add a chapter and figure out a way to make a happy ending for Paige and Amir...